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The Time Serpent
03-26-2002, 09:43 AM
well this char is for the challenge and i really would like some harsh crits... :wip: hit me ppl:Dhttp://www.cyborganics.org/mark/TTS/driderx4.jpg
ohh yeah the pose is a bit stiff cuz im gonna rig him later
03-26-2002, 10:41 AM
Have some variation in the leg spikes... size, position etc.
03-26-2002, 12:13 PM
Looks like a drider from R.A Salvatores forgottean realms books, Drizzt brother perhaps? :)
I think the part where torso and spider combines looks kinda weird...and yes, add some variation to legs and spikes...
03-26-2002, 10:54 PM
ok here goes.
I really like the bottom half of the model, it is very good. The "human" part of the model lacks something though. I feel that the arms need more shape, they seem like well defined tubes now, needs more rounding. Also his waist suffers from this as well, he needs more curves his shape is not defined as much as his muscles are.
Now on to his head. Very nice design here I particularly like his ears. I have to say that his hair is the least convincing part of the model. The color is too stark, and the hair seems to obviously built in layers.
I do think that the character has alot of promise, and these few touches would go a long way adding to his realizm.
hope this helps :)
01-13-2006, 03:00 AM
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