My animation / commercial

[danil]

Hi

I think you have some good things in your clip like the color of character design. On the other hand your animation is a bit less expressive than your graphics. Maybe more anticipation or more acceleration would have been more "cartoon".

By the way it is great stuff! Keep on it.

[besnik]

Danil: Thank you very much for the reply. Yes your right about the animation, to tell you the truth i havent studied that much animation, actualy this is my first serious animation that i've did and i promise i'll get better.

Please comment, i really need constuctive critics on my work i know i am not good but please leet me know where i suck the most.

Thank you for your support

[noobie]

hmm it looks okay.. the part that looks the most off is probably whent he lower guy gets angry and he starts to jump onto the ledge that part needs more anticipation and when he falls on top the other guy i think the timings off there it seems to float for a bit... to me anyways see what some of the pros think about it

[besnik]

Thank you for your reply
Yes you are right about the animation it's kinda slow motion, sure i need some more aniticipation but to tell you the truth when i was animating i dont know how i didn't notice that untill it was all done and after a week without looking at it i noticed these problems, maybe its some kind of optical ilusion that your eye is playing on you when animating, i dont know.
Anyways thank you very much for crits.
And please feel free to comment.

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