my first DemoReel

[yuriythebest]

some of it is quite good, some of it is way too simple. First off remove the slideshow at the beginning- it's annoying, no offence. Also cut down on the max viewport videos for most of them display completed tutorials? what's that about? I liked the 'chasing scene', and the sea ship scene, those two were quite good though the chasing scene looks way too terragenish. So, cut down on the primitive stuff and slideshow,add more cool stuff and you're all set! good luck!

[jhasse]

some of it is quite good, some of it is way too simple. First off remove the slideshow at the beginning- it's annoying, no offence. Also cut down on the max viewport videos for most of them display completed tutorials? what's that about? I liked the 'chasing scene', and the sea ship scene, those two were quite good though the chasing scene looks way too terragenish. So, cut down on the primitive stuff and slideshow,add more cool stuff and you're all set! good luck!


Ja ja ja ok thx for your comments, my i hope the second one will must better. And yeah must of my work are beginning style, but i getting better.

[chriswelsby]

Hi there,

I am no expert as I am still lokking for that first elusive job mysel, but personally I think your reel would be a lot more effective if a bit shorter. We are after all trying to impress a bunch of very busy people! I to would get rid of some of the in package shots and the slideshow at the beginning. Plus I think it would help if you made it clear from the beggining of the reel what sort of jobs you are after as there is a lot of diversity in the reel.

Hope this helps

Chris

[jhasse]

Hi there,

I am no expert as I am still lokking for that first elusive job mysel, but personally I think your reel would be a lot more effective if a bit shorter. We are after all trying to impress a bunch of very busy people! I to would get rid of some of the in package shots and the slideshow at the beginning. Plus I think it would help if you made it clear from the beggining of the reel what sort of jobs you are after as there is a lot of diversity in the reel.

Hope this helps

Chris

Thx i going to take da into consideration...:)

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