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Hybridesigns

01-15-2007, 12:22 AM

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Title: Commercial Space
Name: Osama Siam Sherif Eid
Country: Egypt
Software: 3ds max, AutoCAD, VRay

Mall Interior Perspective for the main Core (Atrium) .Perspective done using 3d studio max and rendered with vray V.1.5 Within 18 hours ... (lights have much samples).. and lots of vray light Supported with Default max lighting ,. The Project For AlSarh RealEstate Investments.

Comments and critiques are more than welcomed which intended for the development of the Scene..

Thank You -

shkumbinferizi

01-15-2007, 01:06 PM

beautiful image!
Congrats!

Chuppa

01-15-2007, 07:52 PM

I love the fact that you used silhouettes of people instead of the usual stuff. That, combined with the 70's colors, make it a great image.

Hybridesigns

01-15-2007, 08:49 PM

Thank You Guys ,.

But I hope i can Get Comments as Design_lighting Design ,..

more critiques are welcomed

Chuppa

01-15-2007, 10:17 PM

Well, it's a bit hard to comment those aspects as it's a very "stylised" image, but I'll try.

First off, the image is too grainy. This might be the glow effect you applied, but I'd try to tone it down or at least limit it to areas where it adds to the overall image.

The design of the place looks great, though it looks a lot like a bar, which I don't know if the client is looking for. I absolutely love it though. The design is great, the materials look spectacular. I really, really feel like going out when viewing this.

I think you overdid the orange effect where the pillars meet the ceiling; I'd rather make it the same metal as on the ground.

Perhaps you could add some volumetric light (VERY slight amount).

I think the floor could be a little less light, but that may be due to my dance floor ideas :P.

Hybridesigns

01-16-2007, 04:40 AM

Well,. Thank You Alot for your real useful Comments,. i think it's forward for a better scene,.

It's Not intended for a Bar or Dance Space,. um,. it's just like Enrance Space for Commercial Buildings which contains Stores and SHops,..

Let me Explain it in other way,. it's like " Mini-Mall" and this is ust the Entrance and you may Notice the Escalators on the two sides,.

But the Halo Effect of the light in the Different Mezzanine Floor gave the Feeling of THE BAR,..

Thank You

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