bathroom, Tomas Zaujec (3D)

[SocramOsnofla]

Really good i like it a lot.

Critiques:

- the "ducky" isnt on par with the rest of the scene

- those puddles on the floor are kinda hard to see and seems muddy because its reflecting the shower curtain.

- the shower curtain looks too transparent... kinda revealing

keep up the good work

[legon]

Very thanks to you SocramOsnofla for your Critiques. Thanks a lot :)

[kwills2567]

It looks pretty good, but your person in the shower looks weird, like he/she is crouched about about ready to pounce on someone. In general, people can look odd in otherwise really nice environmental scenes. Also, you have a little too much tile texture repeating on the walls and mirror frame. I like your lighting and the ceramic of the sink. I like the products with the labeling too.

[legon]

kwills2567 Thanks for you critic :)

Im happy for you critic ;) Boys Thanks :)

[hauny]

everythings are good execpt:

1> small water on the floor.
2> curtain

Rendering is good.
This is 3 star for me.

I interested to know about the parameter of v-ray you used for render this image.

[veljko-lemonade]

reall nice image,
the front part of the image is my favourite,
the shampo bottles could have been better and they are imho the weakest point in the image- i would put in some more specularity on the curtians-other than this i would replace the grey in the window and put in some background image
in any cease, its really a great image, and if you were to fix these small issues it would be a 5 star thread imho

4 stars from me:)

[legon]

Thanks Boys :)

There is the render Setup>
Render Time 10:20 + render AO on P4 531, 1 GB DDR, Ge force 6600.

http://www.legon.sk/tmp/render.gif

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