Night Girl

[AnOldFriend]

I think this is a realy great start. You did a very good job on the face as far as I am concerned, however I am no pro so perhaps somebody with more experiance can offer some better comments.

[Inclementia]

I think this is a realy great start. You did a very good job on the face as far as I am concerned, however I am no pro so perhaps somebody with more experiance can offer some better comments.

Thanks!
Even any opinion of "no pro" is important to me! :)

[aumortis]

Hi there.
Your drawing is very good already O.o [how long it took you to draw it?]
There are two things that bugs me. One is are those dark rings around irises, they are too noticeable for me and I think they're a bit distracting. Second is that her face looks all too smooth to me. But it's just just my subjective thought.
And how did you do her lips? o.o they are awesome! [I wish I could draw like that :< ]

[ablorat]

Amazing work. Especially i like the lips which came up most gorgeous and real.

Smart use of background too. Good colors.
I don't see any serious flaws in this piece, so to me it looks pretty finished.

[frostblade]

I don’t think we can help much without seeing the original photo ref you used.


This drawing is nice and your rendering skills are very good.

It is so smooth and detailed and in a realistic style it’s really easy to look wrong as well because of the tonal values on certain areas like the cheeks, which is one of the main issues with it.

Structurally, there is something wrong with the jaw line and the ear to too far away making it look a bit distorted. Like the skull isn’t quite right.

The eyebrows are not sitting right on the face, sure you can puck eyebrows to that thin but the shape is not right for her face shape and not matching. The pupil and iris can be less perfect circle shape too because it's not a front view angle and kind of makes it look like it's not in perspective.

[Inclementia]

http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i229/Inclementia/referens.jpg

This is reference, but I don't want absolutely follow this picture :) I am painting to make it better , it is not interesting to copy every datail...
So I don't think it can help a lot but any way may be.. :)

[Inclementia]

:rolleyes: AND thanks to All of you for your comments! :thumbsup:

[Inclementia]

Hi there.
Your drawing is very good already O.o [how long it took you to draw it?]
There are two things that bugs me. One is are those dark rings around irises, they are too noticeable for me and I think they're a bit distracting. Second is that her face looks all too smooth to me. But it's just just my subjective thought.
And how did you do her lips? o.o they are awesome! [I wish I could draw like that :< ]

About her lips
http://i67.photobucket.com/albums/h312/Diana_V_Cornix/gdgdgd.jpg
First I made them smoother, than used unsharp-mask filter

and from this crop started to see some mistakes... :eek:

[ablorat]

Wow! what a difference! I think owner of the source photograph would be much pleased looking at the result of your work!

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