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borreguito
01-03-2007, 11:39 AM
Hello, This is my new demo reel.
I made the models in 3dmax 8, render in 3dmax 9 with vray 1.5rc3
texturing in photoshop, and postproduction in adobe premiere 2.0.

I hope that this year comes with a lot of good jobs, i have one, but i would like to improve.

I hope you like it

a greetings.

http://s125.photobucket.com/albums/p73/3djavier/?action=view&current=Demo_reel_low.flv

Some screenshots.

Boo´s room

http://i125.photobucket.com/albums/p73/3djavier/boowallpaper3.jpg

Village street

http://i125.photobucket.com/albums/p73/3djavier/10000copia.jpg

Wanny

http://i125.photobucket.com/albums/p73/3djavier/personaje.jpg
borreguito
01-04-2007, 03:40 PM
Hello, nobody has words to critique my demo?


please I need your words.
thank you
southernboy
01-04-2007, 04:16 PM
Solid work! A few things......your reel is way too long! There are quite a few things in there that I would definately not show and that don't need to be shown. You always just want to show your BEST work! Feels like you tried to fit everything on there. Something else that stood out is how slow the camera shots are. Anyone that knows anything about CG would be able to tell within 5 seconds of looking at Boo's room that you know you're proficient with modeling! Those are just some major things I noticed. It was hard for me to really focus on the work b/c I was a little annoyed with how long and slow everything is. sorry for being a little nit picky! Just trying to help out. All aside, GREAT stuff!!
Wongedan
01-04-2007, 04:22 PM
I thought it was for right click and save , so its live reel

your first scene is very good, and some of the character thexture is nice also
some cartoon character are little bit boxy
but overall is really good environment :)

maybe you can cut off a bit the timing, 4 mins is a little bit too long
Wongedan
01-04-2007, 04:37 PM
**double post sorry**
borreguito
01-04-2007, 04:56 PM
hello xvampire, thank you very much.

are you now in the vfs?

i traveled to vancouver june 06 to the 3d program, but i had a family program and i come to spain in the same week.
now i have problems with the school.
when you started?
PK-man
01-06-2007, 12:38 AM
I agree with other comments here that it's too long. Try to keep it around 2 mins, no longer than 3. I really like your enviroments, especially Boo's room. Solid work, great job!!
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