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vijaymattam

01-03-2007, 09:41 AM

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Title: Residence
Name: Vijayendra Mattam
Country: India
Software:

Hello CG Guys,

Here's my latest work done for a client. Its been already approved but still i would welcome your valuable C & C .
Its done using 3ds Max & Rendered using Vray. Please take some time out for the feedback. Your suggestions will make me to improve the quality in my future projects.

Thanks in advance
Vijay

RobertF

01-03-2007, 09:35 PM

Hi,

I like the moddeling... its very cool

But I think you have to do some perspective fixes
the tree on the left side of the house is a bit to small and the plants in the front are to large
overall it is to clean and the picture of the bicycle driver dose not fit to the light...

so thats my crit :-D

I hope the crit helps...

vijaymattam

01-04-2007, 01:19 AM

hi Maxor

Thanks for the suggestions, Will surely take care of them hereafter.

Thanks
Vijay

KadirYurdakul

01-04-2007, 07:41 AM

hi,
first, i like that vegetation.
You can improve your environment with a background, and some foreground details like the road. Some textures for the architecture, and maybe some tint for the air.. it looks like you have different shadow-casting light sources, right? you can fix them
For visualizations RPCs are fast solutions, but for realism they dont fit in the lighting of the scene. You can use 3d models.
And you can do some perspective fixes like Maxor mentioned.. your car is too small for your RPCs.. and your plants are bigger than the car.
overall its a nice viz.
i hope the crit helps

vijaymattam

01-04-2007, 10:01 AM

Hi Kadir,

Thanks for your valuable suggestions....

Yes the background and foreground could have been still better as u suggested. Texture of architecture were fixed by architect, so they became mandatory for me to use :sad: .... Coming to the lighting, i used only one direct light for shadow casting and one vray light for overall scene light. I havent used any RPC's stuff.. everything is edited by me at my freetime ( vegetations ) . Perspective was again not of my choice :sad: .. i usually love to keep camera at 5.5 ft from the ground level but the architect wanted it for almost 10ft. Yes plants are in wrong proportion as i scaled them, will take care of them in future.

Once again thanks for taking time for me. I have seen your portfolio, they are great... Keep up the good work.:thumbsup:

Regs
Vijay

KadirYurdakul

01-04-2007, 08:46 PM

Oh yes, architects can cause that much:)
Sorry for the misunderstanding, i thought the characters were RPCs, but they are 2D right?
If you are looking for professional lighting tutorials, take a look at gnomons Exterior-GI DVDs, they are great.
Thank you for your kindness about my portfolio and for your time of course, keep up the good stuff.
Regards.

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