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youthCrisis 01-03-2007, 03:01 AM Hi all!
This should be something like end of a ...um... some kind of struggle... but after 4 hours of making this pict I still have a strong feeling that something is very, very wrong with this pict but I cant realize what could it be?!
Depth, Luminosity, something about composition ? So if anyone have any idea or advice I ll be glad to hear it! :)
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Arlekin
01-03-2007, 03:18 AM
hey...:)
So if it helps you in any way i think when you paint the shadows through and darkness with different shadowtones it would help the pic...more glow and light form the shopwreck/comet thingie... the bottom line is more light...i hope you stay on track and keep practising...
:thumbsup:
Prinova
01-03-2007, 03:54 AM
I think it's Luminosity, i think sometimes if you want to show some darkness you have to add light, maybe you could add some space war object and stuff like that, a wreck of vehicle or somethin. I'm sure it would look cool at the end :)
youthCrisis
01-03-2007, 09:33 PM
Thx for advices :)
Sulla
01-03-2007, 10:42 PM
Besides the lunimosity it also looks like your image does not have a real center of attention at the moment. Any way hope that helps.
llama-d
01-04-2007, 12:49 AM
I think you might try making the clouds on the other side of the ship lighter, and then make the mountains lighter as the further away you get the lighter it gets. I'm not getting enough information from the pictures so things need to be more visible. I hope that helps a little bit, or any.
youthCrisis
01-04-2007, 09:51 PM
Thx all for smart suggestions but I run out of ideas for this one(maybe cause it took me to much time) although I still have a same feeling bothering me- but it will pass when I start a new thread :)
Anyway, hope u ll like it :)
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