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artofsw
01-01-2007, 08:22 AM
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Title: Hellisha
Name: Simon Wright
Country: Australia
Software: Photoshop

Hellisha is a story based in hell which is inside the earth, a hollow earth. Demons exist and people have lived there longer than on the surface.
9 hours to complete. I used a new cool brush to do the clouds.
Designing a monster is really fun, and hope to do more of then soon.

Any thoughts?
Toniko
01-01-2007, 12:30 PM
Hello there!

You've got a goo idea on setting other light sources, such as the one under her leg. With the background colours, I can sense that it's a dark and an unpleasant area.

I kinda suck at making critiques, but I have a few critiques to point out. The monster kinda looks dull a bit, and the shading kinda feels flat. Especially his Left hand, which seems to lack some shading there. Maybe you could've added more detail, texture and features to the background, because it looks pretty bland. The woman looks okay to me, but her pelvis is a bit distracting, because it seems short according to the connection of her pants and her belly.

Looking at this picture, it seems you might have painted this image with a low resolution, and maybe if you could paint it at a high resolution, I think it may fix the problem of trying to add all the details and information.

Keep this in mind, and let's see how your works turn out in the future.
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