the book of tales, Andre Luiz Fernandes (3D)

[mitchelhunt]

your modeling can use some work. on the phonograph, i would recommend using a subsurface modifier around the rim of the horn. also, if i were to imagine this piece, the lighting would be darker, more sinister looking.

the modeling is good, although you could use a chair ;) hope i could help!

[andreluiz]

Thank you by yours observations. I'm now retouching this scene with the chair included.
It is one of my first works in blender. Since I'm a novice in 3d world and it's so hard
to learn alone, but I got some progress!

forgive me because my bad english!!
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your modeling can use some work. on the phonograph, i would recommend using a subsurface modifier around the rim of the horn. also, if i were to imagine this piece, the lighting would be darker, more sinister looking.

the modeling is good, although you could use a chair ;) hope i could help!

[mitchelhunt]

Thank you by yours observations. I'm now retouching this scene with the chair included.
It is one of my first works in blender. Since I'm a novice in 3d world and it's so hard
to learn alone, but I got some progress!

forgive me because my bad english!!
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no problem :D im still a beginner myself, and could use all the help i can get

[kvra]

to te add como favorito e espero ver mais trabalhos seus posta umas coisas 2d também, até a próxima

[Idenheart]

The only main thing I can see is the lighting, it needs to be more horific, but mostly the table's shadow is leaning towards the lamp on the table. Which is odd for me. But that may be what you want.
The modeling would be the next thing, then if you want you could add some textures on top of the wall texture to give it some variation.

but dang nice work

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