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Ian3d

12-31-2006, 07:13 PM

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Title: Last Stop
Name: Ian Spriggs
Country: Canada
Software: Maya

This scene was created when I was attending school. It took about a week from concept to completion. It was modeled in Maya and textures were done in Photoshop. Comments and crits welcome. Thanks

Tesparg

01-01-2007, 12:50 AM

Nice scene, it remindes me of the Matrix (the scenes in the subway).

Melvil

01-01-2007, 02:49 AM

Looks great! Fantastic texturing.

The only crit I have is that the rounded corners of the windows and doorways caught my eye as being too low-poly.

JFVerissimo

01-01-2007, 04:24 AM

Excelent texturing, and the scene is very good. Congratulations and happy new year!

living_for_cg

01-01-2007, 06:44 AM

Its so fantastic job maaan:thumbsup:

monkeyboy1423

01-01-2007, 12:24 PM

I second the low poly corners and I also think that the floor looks to shine and new compared to how distressed everything else is. but outstanding job.

mister3d

01-01-2007, 12:47 PM

Looks really cool, but I would put the camera even closer to the floor to make more prominent view.

maantas

01-01-2007, 03:31 PM

looks good, but also a bit strange - it looks like the train "room" (dono english word for that)
it seems its very very big train, probably not the first clas, but clas zero :)
what i meen - is the size of things (proportions) the size of the dor at the end compared to the seats, the height of train.... i dono just my impresion...

chveti

01-01-2007, 05:36 PM

maantas - i think proportions are pretty good , it's a subway car so there are long benches and those cars are big - even 18 meters long. :)

Nice image , maybe you should add some more detail :)
3 ***

maantas

01-01-2007, 08:08 PM

ok Chveti, my mistake, i guess i am not so acostumed with metros, or the ones i use are diferent:)
also the things u see through a windows looks a bit the same in all of them... like the same dirt map..
and the lights are harsh... imo..
but all thet is just small details, which could be are buging only me, might be its all right...
i agree about details..
but thats cool metro, anyway:) (how ever u spel that anyway- sorry for bad speling:( )

mitchelhunt

01-03-2007, 10:51 AM

wonderful mood, and great texturing!

only one crit about the modeling, and that's the seats. i think it's the roundedness of the sides, but for some reason it sort of makes me think the scene is very fake...a cartoon where it doesnt belong.

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