thief

[PAOOO]

hi, sorry my english is too bad, the technics and quality is very nice!! but i have problem to make difference betwen the foreground ( the woman ) and the background, i hope my worlds could help you, really nice picture !!

[Squibbit]

thanks for feedback, appreciated :thumbsup:


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[nebezial]

holy crap this is awesome..oh and notice my chouce of words...holy...crap:D

[FrankUnique]

Amazing work oO I'd like to say just one thing, IN MY OPINION(Well I'm noob, you don't need to agree XD) it's about her face, needs more light to get more volume because her face and her hair appears to be flat. Sorry for my bad english.

[erilaz]

Very sweet Squib, you should post this directly to finished works. :D

[gu]

Hey squibb!! fine work!! It seems like you´re painting in a real surface, like wood, I think! the theme is fine too and hot colors are well combined! congratulations!

rock n´roll!

gusss

[Imirie]

That looks really great. I love the colors and the texture! Something seems odd about her face, though.. like it's more doll-like than everything else that seems more natural.
Great picture, though. :)

[Squibbit]

thanks for all the comments :)

okay how's it look now?

http://www.saunalahti.fi/panuom/Thief_15.jpg

[Lehnard]

Great picture!

The only thing that buggs me is the perspective of the dagger, it doesn´t realy fit to the hand in my opinion.

[Prinova]

this looks great my friend, I love that texture effect in the picture :)

[MichaelZHsee]

nice work dude~i like the pastel like kinda technique,i agreed with what Imirie mentioned above,her face doesnt seem to match the rest of the painting somehow,otherwise,the overal exercution is good,especially the mood and lighting:thumbsup:

ps*just alil nitpick ,i think it would look more natural if u tone down the highlight below her right thigh

[TeroM]

Whoa, great work man! :thumbsup:

[aumortis]

Great job! :thumbsup:
Her face looks weird tho.. I would try making her lips a bit more wide maybe?

[Kevin-Killjoy]

There are a couple of anatomical problems that need tending to...her head is too symmetrical and not quite correctly positioned on her body i.e. the neck is not placed in the centre of the shoulders, it's too far to the right. Her left arm seems too short compared to her other arm. Sraw an imaginary line from elbow to elbow and you'll see what I mean.

I like your style, it's quite distinctive. The design's good too.


-Killjoy

[arisuonpaa]

Looking good! Maybe add a bit more color variation to the face to add more life.

-Ari

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