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Hey im currently workin on a short animation using my frog character. So far ive blocked out the rough animation with the ending still do to.. then ill go back to everything and start cleaning and tweaking the animation. Just wanna get the main poses across etc..
Anyway any crits, comments, suggestions and tips would be useful whilst im still working on it.
Ive uploaded it to my portfolio gallery
12-28-2006, 05:05 PM
only crit is that his body needs to be WAY looser. its too stiff right now, and you dont get any sense of weight/movement with him. he's a frog after all, so really exaggerate him!
12-28-2006, 06:18 PM
Ya, I agree, the arms are way to stiff, and also the hands. THe overall movements are fine, but it just seems robotic at times with the idle positions.
Thanks for the comments, i agree its very stiff and robotic at present will get to work on it as soon as i finish up roughing the animation out. Will post an update soon!
Ok so ive updated up animation, i kno the animation is still not perfect but I had a deadline looming so I had to wrap it up quick for university. Although I plan to come back to this afterwards to polish it further and add some more elements to the scenery. So any C&Cs are welcome. Thanks
01-14-2007, 09:12 PM
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