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Roly

12-22-2006, 11:11 AM

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Title: Nightingale
Name: Li jun
Country: China
Software: Photoshop

Hello everybody
This work named Oriole I finished recently. The painting was done in Photoshop CS
welcome comment and say hi
Thanks for taking a look at this : )
Any of various Old World passerine birds of the family Oriolidae, of which the males are characteristically black and bright yellow or orange.Color is flamboyant.
There is a legend in Persia, when roses are blossoming, the nightingale began to sing ,He confided his love to the rose£¬ until the last .He is so crazy about the aroma that rose has left in the air, and lie down the tree.
When the nighingale knew that rose was granted as the queen of flowers, he is so happy that fly to the rose, which gave vent to charming fragrance. While he was stabbed in the chest, by the thorn of the rose, with his blood colored the flower into red.
It' s the time for red rose to blossom, when nightingales calling all night. Persians still believe this today.

and some closeups:
http://features.cgsociety.org/gallerycrits/242322/242322_1166789603_medium.jpg

CGriffin

12-22-2006, 05:05 PM

Wow, so much detail! The colors are luscious. I think there might be a few anatomical tweaks you could do, on her left arm. Something about the elbow and forearm area isn't reading correctly. And her foot doesn't appear to have any weight on it. I might work on refining the look of her legs to match her upper body and face; they seem a bit blurry by comparison. The face...headress...birds....wonderful! I think you could shave off a little of that overhead treestuff for better focus, though. Great piece overall!

sokolova

12-22-2006, 08:18 PM

Very nice technique, great concept.
I like the shadows and ligting effects, and your character looks very nice.

Ryuu0

12-23-2006, 01:56 AM

I like details you putted in this piece (tree barks, etc) the birds are nicely done too. I think the forearm doesn't complement the hand, the forearm seems like it is in supination position, yet the hand seems to be in half supinated position. And the lower torso should be a little longer and the toes should be fully pressed against the bark. But overall it's still stands out nonetheless. keep it up. :thumbsup:

Sarima

12-23-2006, 08:42 AM

Hi, a very detailed caracter, so pretty, but I agree with CGriffin, looks as a poser reference, and the forest is stunning but the texture of the wood is so clearness back and a bit of blurry in the nearest, need a deep sensation to be a master piece, but at last a very good job, congrats!

raufaamir

12-23-2006, 10:25 AM

Detailed work, I like the tree's texture and you have painted gold very well:thumbsup:

Sweetangel

12-23-2006, 11:18 AM

hey there
great job done :) nice details keep it up

Roly

10-04-2007, 03:48 PM

Thanks everyone for the feedback.
CGriffin : thank you.Many thanks to these opinions that you lift, the body of arm and leg department is some problems, I to body still some lacks, should understand some anatomies more.
sokolova : thank you.The color only beautiful thing, can make the public feeling dulcify.
Ryuu0 : thank you.Many thanks to your support to me, my body would notice with effort
Sarima : thank you.The opinion that you give, mean a with gratitude
raufaamair : thank you.once studied a jewelry design, I also liked Russia to cruise to return painting parties very much of scenery, have to draw lessons from to this.
sweetangel : thank you.I will keep
Many thanks to support that everyone gives:bounce:

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