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Gisaiagami
12-20-2006, 05:17 PM
Hi friend
this is my painting attempt again. The process of the image until is in mine sketchbook here.
My dream is to finish some of these paintings. E this is walking for this. But the nose is bothering me. Something that I noticed is that I am not giving itself well with tablet.
The refine and color of image is very strange for me
I am studying constantly but I do not find something that pleases me.
At last I would like very the your aid and clearly opinion if he had improvement or not of my works.

;)
Thank you so much
http://i112.photobucket.com/albums/n193/gisa_iagami/g4f2.jpg
Gisaiagami
12-21-2006, 11:19 AM
ok
I tried to improve the nose, the eyes. Lack to refine. I am not obtaining to leave smooth it.
however I find that it is better. It would like your opnion

http://i112.photobucket.com/albums/n193/gisa_iagami/gf5.jpg
Isatche
12-21-2006, 01:23 PM
You need to check anatomy. Cheek bones are missing, and between them and chin you have sobe bulge like she took a hit in the head. Her left eye sholdn't be seen whole from that angle, since eyes are round. Check some photos for reference.
Gisaiagami
12-21-2006, 03:56 PM
I do not know to use photo for reference the one that :(
I was trying to use age this:
http://i112.photobucket.com/albums/n193/gisa_iagami/1451b7a8412dd9.jpg
Isatche
12-21-2006, 06:34 PM
Ok, that photo is nice enough...
Now look closely at her left eye. Notice that you cannot see whole eye, like you can see right one. In your painting, both eyes are visible in while as seen frontaly, so you need to change that.
Other thing is about cheek bone. You should raise it a little, and cheek should go closer to mouth, because this way it looks like a dent or something.

Here is a picture of what I am saying, so compare...
http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/7525/explanationgq5.jpg
Shadowbrooke
12-22-2006, 01:15 AM
Hi Gislaine,

Great to see you trying a new painting. I think it's great that you're using ref, but rather than copy the ref blindly or resort to the grid methoc, try anatomy deconstruction to understand how the figure is formed. here is a quick rough analysis I've started for you based on your ref:
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l146/feyarts/planes.jpg

Analyzing the ref this way will allow you to construct your own figures after many practice and will be ref-free :)

Keep it up and happy painting.

Brooke.
Gisaiagami
12-27-2006, 04:20 PM
thank you for reply
I tried to apply but the painting seems hard very =

http://i112.photobucket.com/albums/n193/gisa_iagami/g4-6.jpg
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