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mhayes
12-20-2006, 03:27 PM
hello this is just a basic walk, need pointers please


http://www.youtube.com/videos/SIRMEEKO

dremer
12-21-2006, 05:17 PM
Hey, it was a little hard to get an idea of the walk, since it's so short, and i'm not sure if youtube has a loop option. But anyway, i could still get an idea.

-I would say that he looks a little stiff. His fingers are straight, where they should be bent a little, and maybe move a little.
-His right leg seems like it pops when it's stretched out.
-I feel like he could use a little more weight when he steps down. Maybe move or rotate the hips a little more, to get him to feel more like he's leaning into his step.
-Also, it's a little hard to tell if his left arm is swinging with an arc when it goes back. It might just be the angle.

I hope that helps!
Good luck!

mhayes
12-21-2006, 09:16 PM
thanks for the reply

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