the sexy samurai girl , ukyo tono (2D)

[jramauri]

Hi ukyotono

I like this drawing very much. But there some things that could be improved:

* The painting is looking a bit artificial, in my opinion. it seems like those aerograph works from 80's or 90's. Maybe you could make more loose strokes, to produce a "not so perfect" effect.
* Her spine line should be a little more to the right - our right - to represent correctly the volume on her back muscles.
* A bit more of definition on hands. I alwas say that is fundamental to work well on face and hands. People always look to them, so any mistake is easily noticed. If necessary, get some Google references.
* It seems there's some light points coming from the inside of her skirt.. But I think for your light sources this shouldn't be happening.
* I think the boots and clothes should have more folds, and texture. this would help to make things a little more believabe.

So those are my crits. I hope you don't mind. When I see a drawing that I like, I made some crits to the person who made it, so he/she could do even better next time ;)
Keep it up!

[ukyotono]

My English is not good :sad:

So can only depend on the translation software See your saying like this :D HAHA~

I am really very glad This is my first work I will adhere to some questions that you said to do for the improvement of the next works There is guidance this of yours that is my greatest harvest What I knew and made great efforts is studied :)

Express gratitude to guidance, Thanks( / ^ 0 ^ )/

:thumbsup:

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