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Title: mbgirl
Name: Satoshi Ueda
Country: Japan
Software: 3ds max, Photoshop, VRay
Hello.
Plug-in Vray of 3dstudiomax is used.
The necklace and earrings use Corstics.
I'm sorry English is not good.
Please see by all means.
Thank you.
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The feeling is very Therapy Effects of Qingchun,I like it! 4*
ipdesigner
12-20-2006, 08:14 AM
*WOW! She is LOVELY:wise::love:imo, i would rather omit that blur effects.....good job by the way!:applause:
TheOutsider
12-20-2006, 08:40 AM
Nice skin!!...
Good Job Ueda.
Love it ( any animation ? ).
SAMER
Magma3D
12-20-2006, 08:57 AM
very nice girls.. good job man! :)
ffourier
12-20-2006, 09:01 AM
nice job man. I like the hairs. The little blue devil is so funny :) Maybe the eyes are a little bit strange, don't know exactly why sorry. And maybe there is a small problem with DOF. The right shoulder is out of focus ok.... but i don't really understand why some hairs are also blurred.
other than that this is pretty good !
ArneK
12-20-2006, 09:08 AM
Really great work! Maybe the reflections in the eyes are a bit too much, but it is a sweet piece you've made here :)
PavelPetrenko
12-20-2006, 10:43 AM
Graet girl! How you draw a skin texture?
Can you show whireframe?
living_for_cg
12-20-2006, 10:53 AM
Cool job... every thing in done nicely ..i think haid needs more work.
:thumbsup:4*
unwrap
12-20-2006, 01:39 PM
Very well done nice and clean work. Congrats.
ChewyPixels
12-20-2006, 02:35 PM
WOW! She's lovely! :drool:
A few crits. I agree with the comments regarding the blur. Not really digging it. I think it's a bit too much. Less would work better here. I also don't really like the necklace. Perhaps she would look better with a topaz and diamond necklace. This way you can still keep the blue jewelry ensemble you have going here. The earrings could use some more work, too. Try using some blurred refractions. That might help it.
As for the hair, I would have to disagree with living_for_cg's comment. I actually like the hair. I really don't think you need to make any changes to it other than perhaps adding some more subdivisions to the hair polys to remove the faceting that's visible around the center hairline.
The eyes look gorgeous...maybe a bit oversized but I have the impression that you are not going for realism here. As others have stated, the reflections could use some more tweaking. Still, I think her eyes are one of the qualities that makes her so beautiful.
The modeling is excellent! :thumbsup: Nothing to crit here. I would really like to see the wireframe.
That's all. I think if you work on these and add a background (even if it's basic and a bit blurred) I think you can manage getting frontpage for this. Good luck! :)
Ripmork
12-20-2006, 04:04 PM
Gee...If this would be a stereoscopic image i would blush:blush::cool:
Was she made with a little help from the blueprints, or was it imagination? :D
Really beautifull girl, great model and render.
siouxfire
12-20-2006, 09:42 PM
Very nice. I'm not too keen on the blur or the bones of her neck/chest which look a little too defined and anatomically wrong. On a personal preference level, the necklace and earrings look great but I don't think the colour compliments the model very well.
Overall though, you're showing off some potent talent; excellent work
OSBOURNE
12-20-2006, 09:59 PM
Great fantasy style!
mindrot
12-21-2006, 10:05 PM
Very nice work.
One crit, though it's very subtle is that she seems to be a tad bit squint.
Her hair on the left side of the image (close to her ear-ring), seems a bit strange, almost like a bad paint over- there seems to be a wierd triangular shaped piece of hair that seems to be out of place.
~M~
Thank you for everybody and the impression.
Very, it is useful.
The texture of the skin is a processing of the photograph with Photoshop.
Nobody referred especially by her.
It was made by the imagination.
Please wait for the wire frame a little.
It is puzzled to the up-loading method.
duvet
12-23-2006, 09:39 AM
Great work!!
ここで日本人の方を見かけるのはめったにないので嬉しいです^^
keep it up!
>duvet
確かに日本人見かけませんね。文面見てちょっと、ほっとしました。
英語が殆ど翻訳ソフトなのでうまく書けてるか心配ですが、頑張りますー!
Thank you!
AZULBLUE
12-27-2006, 06:42 AM
great job!
very nice skin shader, not only shader, excellent modeling.
she has elegance. lovely.
i want you to keep it up.
im looking forward to next works.
Hasa3d
12-30-2006, 12:55 AM
very very beautifull.i love your this work.good luck.
TaNoOkI
01-06-2007, 01:58 AM
Very good illustration!! I love the way you manage to make the hairs so real ( and the rest of the body of course)
ところで今私は日本の3Dの会社を探しています。たとえば映画のFXとか、なんでもいい :)
まだうまくいえないけだ頑張ります!
Thank you for everybody.
It will hold out in the future.
My best regards.
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