Smitty update

[Spirit2029]

the pic...

[kerosene]

Its cool. I like it.

But he has survived too well from his unhealthy life. When I smoke and work extrmem hours I look worse. - I mean that you might want to make him look more tired. - More dark red and blue under the eyes. Maybe more hanging upper lid - he looks too aware. Saggy under eyes could add something too.

These are naturally only subjective suggestions.,



Heikki

[Jboy]

that looks awesome.

[Spirit2029]

well thanx for the replies guys.... kerosene ill definetly take your sugestions to heart, when I get his head riged, ill see what it looks like with his eyes half cloesed, but I will add some deper bags under the eyes, more sag..

I was looking for some more sugestions on the skin, like if the color suits or not, the natural tatooing works? etc...

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[Lukashi]

He looks sweet nice job

[Spirit2029]

wow 118 views and 3 comments, common guys,....takes two seconds to put some input in, and who knows where that may lead....

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[evildeli]

I get the feeling that the character is young. If you want him to look older, add more wrinkles, take out some of the shine to him, give more bumps. Give him more of a weathered look. I would also dirty up his outfit a little.

[Aearon]

first of all: very nice model, this guy has a lot of character and he already fit's your description really well

what i don't like about those natural tattoos is that they 'end' so abruptly, maybe they should fade out a little, you could try making the speckles smaller towards the edge of the tattoos (especially on the neck, those isolated 'tracks' don't really make sense imo)

how about tattooing the whole neck, except for the area around the Adam's apple - or the other way around

btw: i don't know what his cloths are supposed to be made of, but they look too clean / stiff to me

other than that....wow man, i especially love those eyes and the goggles and the fatty hair

[Spirit2029]

thanx everyone, the clothes arent even done yet, just roughed, the collar is done, thats all, no textures yet. ill try to have an update up soon....


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