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Rtv
02-15-2003, 05:46 PM
Done for a contest on APX.
I won :bounce:

CLICK HERE (http://www.artprojectx.com/forum/modules/gallery/portfolios/album13/OlgabeatsGreyoxcolour.sized.jpg)

Thanx for viewing

Jec1183
02-15-2003, 10:46 PM
you do realize ulga was the ninja in mgs2 right?
I would have to say the biggest crit is that the ninja looks like it is linked to ulga and the left arm can not possible be seen on that side of the ninja if chopped off. Ulga's left forearm is really funky. your style is nice though.

Rtv
02-16-2003, 03:53 AM
You do realize this is the ninja from MGS1 i hope.

Jec1183
02-16-2003, 06:23 AM
ok ok, I will bend my perception and take your word for that but what about my other crits. what happened to the rest of the ninja.

jone
02-16-2003, 06:32 AM
looks good, but
why that hand flying in there?

LPlasma
02-16-2003, 07:51 AM
The anatomy of her elbow is way off, looks like part of it was just sliced off. It also makes no sense to have a hand flying off if she's stabbing him in the chest. The shading could also use significantly more contrast in order to define the forms of the characters more.

LPlasma
02-16-2003, 07:54 AM
Also, yeah, where are the ninja's legs? :P

Rtv
02-16-2003, 04:08 PM
Honestyly don't care....i won anyways.

foghat555
02-18-2003, 11:56 AM
they re critiquing you in order to help you. to just say you dont care is not going to help you in the long run. even if you dont care you could at least acknowledge threir comments and use their insight in later works.

tigrvision
02-18-2003, 12:33 PM
Originally posted by foghat555
they re critiquing you in order to help you. to just say you dont care is not going to help you in the long run. even if you dont care you could at least acknowledge threir comments and use their insight in later works.

Totally agree. We are in the critique section, you know.
If you're not looking for criticism, then state that when you first post your images.
Good luck.

Rtv
02-18-2003, 04:21 PM
The dude asked me a question and i simply awnsered, i never declined a crit. They're welcome don't get me wrong, i personally think the pic sucks, the reason i was so proud was for beating the competition. Sorry if i offended anyone but that's not what i ment.

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