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kruugs
12-13-2006, 08:56 AM
Hello,

I ended up re-starting this animation, so I have started a new thread.

This is just a my first blocking pass. So I am looking for a critique, if you have some time. Poses? Timing? _____?

Anything at all.

As always, Thank you for viewing it, and comments.

-S

http://www.sheldonkruger.com/alfred.html


***The rigs are from Rodri Torres and Vi Cuong Van. Thank you.
kruugs
12-14-2006, 06:15 AM
Just thought I would respond so maybe its near the top again where someone might see it and have some feedback for me. I want to make this piece a good one.

Thank you
moose2k1
12-15-2006, 02:13 AM
good blocking. few suggestions:

dad:
-do a break down between 468 and 469
-I would get rid of 743 pose
-do a break down between 882 and 883

boy:
-do a couple of "thinking" poses in the 418 pose. He would go dead here if you don't introduce a few subtle poses. he's thinking/confused about what his dad said.
-Have an antic before he gets off the bed in 768-769. Right now he goes forward, have him go back before he goes forward
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