5elene, Grizoo Mirko Grisendi (2D)

[Tim-Gibson]

He he, I like.

I don't know what that says about me though...

[Lman]

Crazy and brilliant


Well done mate
-Liam

[FRENZIEDmind]

LOL! WOW, that's a freaky looking chick! Art and style executed very well.

crit: I think the fingers on her left hand look too small.

[Grizoo]

Thanx guys...the critics always are appreciate.

[Leonardo Lin]

wooooooo.............

i think that is a little thin..........the whole picture.hoo.......it's my opinion

[bradyscott]

I like the style of this image. The body and breasts have a nice weight to them. I have just one critic. You say in your description that she is a "very angry creature." I do not think her facial expressions match this idea. The face seems a bit placid and the eyes are blank with no anger. Other than that I really like the color and style. I am looking forward to seeing more of your work.

[Grizoo]

..the face seems a bit placid and the eyes are blank with no anger.
good observation. The face and the eyes should be representing the animal madness after the killing of a victim. mmm...maybe is not so clear. :banghead:

[Grizoo]

wooooooo.............

i think that is a little thin..........the whole picture.hoo.......it's my opinion
seems useful critique but...what means "a little thin"? :rolleyes:

[FRENZIEDmind]

The face and the eyes should be representing the animal madness after the killing of a victim. mmm...maybe is not so clear. :banghead:
I don't know if you have ever looked into the eyes of an animal when it is just about to attack; I think that's the crazed look you want (after the attack the animal has a look of satisfaction). I've had the opportunity to stare a few animals in the eyes the split-second before they attacked me and it's a look I'll never forget, and it looks the same in different animals (people have the same look). The best way I can describe the look/stare is that the animal is looking at me like I'm destroyed waiting to happen... and it's frightening the first few times you see it. I think that's what you want to capture. :cool:

I would say that the girl's look is close to appearing in the "attack" mode. A couple of things that might help are, she needs to stare directly at the viewer (even if the eyes are googly and looking in different directions) and lean forward more (like she is about to jump on you).

[Grizoo]

I would say that the girl's look is close to appearing in the "attack" mode. A couple of things that might help are, she needs to stare directly at the viewer (even if the eyes are googly and looking in different directions) and lean forward more (like she is about to jump on you).
Very useful suggestions. You've convinced me. I will begin to adjust the look and next i repost the image.
Thanks a lot!

[ikuru]

verry cool. well done.

[ikuru]

one thing, the arm touching the legg, I did not see it at first, might do some good with some stronger shadows or outlines.
/D

[Grizoo]

one thing, the arm touching the legg, I did not see it at first, might do some good with some stronger shadows or outlines.
/D
My objective is that the body emerging from background and i avoided the strong lines intentionally...but however i can try it.

[ikuru]

well thats what I like about it too! I just ment for the area around the thumb for the left hand there touching the leg, first time I saw the pic I didnt register what was going on there...

[Rocwell]

i think it works well. . .i really like the feet and the way the breasts hang. . .i think she could use some emotion in the face. but overall its a very good piece. Nice work!

-Roc
http://johnnyrocwell.blogspot.com/

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