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silmaspareico

12-11-2006, 12:12 PM

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Title: Jazz Bar
Name: Silmas Pareico
Country: Brazil
Software: 3ds max, Photoshop, VRay

This is a study for a Jazz Bar environment for a short animation film I'm ploting.
It should be a mistery/suspense thriller so I wanted to achieve that warm a dramatic atmosfere with shadows and smoke.
Not sure I'm satisfied yet.

monks

12-12-2006, 11:11 AM

hi,

it's a good start, no critic about the modeling, but the ambience looks too "plastic". I think you have to change the greens lamps, they are too self illuminated. I think the ambience need more smoke in the air (like a little fog), and more red colors, to make it more close.
Like this :
http://www.jazzatpearls.com/jazz/gallery/albums/wpw-ec/normal_diningBarFromStage.JPG

silmaspareico

12-12-2006, 12:33 PM

Thanks Monks, those where very rich comments.
I'll be working on the lights and maybe change their colours to a red/orange.
I'll also be working on some table cloths.

Thanks for watching

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