Lost Memories, lio Meling (3D)

[Majorgruber]

Love the concept!
Though I have some crits concerning the execution. First, the water looks a bit strange. I know this is one of the hardest things to look convincible, but your texture looks a bit striped in the spot where the sun is reflecting. Furthermore, the model of the figure walking the board walk looks very familiar... I might be wrong on this, but if it is something you did not do yourself you should give credit to the one who modelled it...
I hope I did not give you the impression that I do not love the picture. I think you did a grat job in depicting the concept of lost memories :thumbsup:

[PeterSanitra]

Really nice concept, but I miss the details..

[jojo1975]

Concept is really great.. a bit more detail would have made it a 5 star image :) Great work indeed

[Allure]

Wow nice concept, you should have invested abit more in the image this one got loads of potential

[siouxfire]

Great concept, I agree with the others that this has the potential. I love the layout, but if that's supposed to be ground, it needs to look more like ground with perhaps a cracked desert surface or something. If it's supposed to be water, it needs a better texture and a little undulation. Also, it's really distracting how the birds mirror the boards breaking away almost exactly. Perhaps this was your intention, but they're so bunched together and so contrasted with the background that they're pulling focus away from the interesting bits. They're also in a dead spot in the sky where there are no clouds; maybe some clouds would balance it out a little?

And my usual caveat; I'm no expert so consume the above with ample amounts of salt.

[sarmiento]

Hi friends thanks its comments that help me to improve.

In reality the model of the girl is of axyz-design.

in the water in reality is concrete I did him asi to mark but the surrealism of the and image but I did not forget his comments.

I continue working in this image to improve it :)

Sorry for my english.

[machadoj]

The mood is great and the concept is nice!

Congrats! :)

Jomar Machado
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[Dist]

Excellent work, a little more detail would make it amazing, four stars for the concept alone.

They're also in a dead spot in the sky where there are no clouds; maybe some clouds would balance it out a little? I understand what you mean but I'm going to have to disagree with you. I believe that having no clouds on the left side of the image helps give the impression of lost memories and nothing being behind him/her.

[stalkeron]

good idea, nice light, ground/water plane a bit strange(maybe u intended it that way), perhaps some waves would have portraied the feeling better:) perhaps the lens flare is too strong... try viewing the image without it...

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