unfinished work

[jcaf84]

Okay, trying to remember what you told me from what all you've fixed, I know you have made some great improvements. I love your character designs and since you want to go into fashion, your color choices are wonderful. I do wonder about the green hair for the highlights. Maybe try and mix it with some yellow? I'm not sure. Also (I'm sure you've already had) add some black lines into the hair to seperate the strands? Love the work and I can't wait to see this piece finished on Friday. Loves IT!

:applause:

[TheDemiurge]

Looking good, I'd say work on the creases in your clothing and its texture. More contrasts would be good too. I love your fashion and character designs. Cant wait to see it completed.

[Ryu327654]

I think you did a good job i love the costume design maybe if there was a sense of light source but other wise its great keep up the good work.

[scarletnocturne]

I think the piece is really awsome. However, looking at the background I noticed that the brick seems a bit too blurred around the edges toward the bottom and on the left side. I wonder if maybe it is because you were trying to seit it in to the image? If so that is good, but it seems you maybe pushed the blur a little too much. The reason I point this out is because at looking at the image my eye was drawn right to it.

[kyuketsuki]

This piece is coming along nicely. Like mentioned before, your costume designs are quite nice. I would like to see you post a more recent version, you have done more work and it's important to show that. I still suggest that you get to the point where you are not afraid to really get in there and paint up the texture and wrinkles of clothing. The mass and volume to the cloth is what makes this type of thing compelling and you don't want to miss that aspect. On a final note, I would also suggest on future work that you limit your pallette to avoid the rainbow look, it does work in a lot of your pieces but you don't want it to become habit, make sure it remains a choice because color is just as important as design in costume design.

Cheers

[kou]

this is the finished piece....tell what u think...

http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l138/mays_photobook/may_thao.jpg

[Ryu327654]

the finished one turned out nice sorry it took so long to get back to it but ive been down for a while. No computer makes it hard to use the internet. Dont know if you still post here or will even see this.

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