snowgirl WIP

[Paul L. Ming]

Hiya.

snowGIRL? Hmmm. I'd say soften up the features, particularily the jawline and chin. The nose could use a bit of 'thining' (nostrals mostly). I'm not sure about the brow...I think it's ok, but it keeps drawing my eye as "weired". Maybe raise it a bit and push it back into the skull a bit? Less pronounced?

Other than that, looks like everything is in the right place and whatnot. :) Keep it up!

[QBA_PL]

I improved some of mistakes as well as added a few details the thanks mainly Shave&HairCut...

http://www.2smaga.com/qbic/Q2_face.jpg

[flingster]

hey like where this is going...keep up the good work....are you going to use it for anything in particular?

[Phasmatis]

Looks good so far but I think you should round out the parts above her eyes, it's looking a little strange.

The texture is very good. :thumbsup:

Are you working from a photograph?

[BiGiNnEr]

Nice TEx:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :D :applause:

[ThirdEye]

hair: nice but too regular
hat: it screams for a texture and some softness, it seems paper
eyes: model them fully, with bulb, lens and so on... now they're simple spheres, add some reflections and/or even environment mapping
skin: it screames for SubSurfaceScattering fx, use chanlum or Translucence plugin in the luminance channel multiplied with a reddish color
Paint eyebrows again and give em bump mapping too
Show us a wireframe too, keep up the good work :)

[QBA_PL]

I put wireframe ... it'is not the the best and the cleanest...yet :)
I worked out these textures alone, I took a picture a bit and retouched a LOT in PS.
Picture face does not it be fake on the ground , then my interpretation.
This only just my first head in 3D :)
He was cap and sweater hereinto time it polished on purpose, I tried to assemble on face.
btw... thx for any comment and sugestions, iam workiing on it all the time :thumbsup:
www.2smaga.com/qbic/Q4_face.jpg -155 kb (http://www.2smaga.com/qbic/Q4_face.jpg)

[ThirdEye]

Show us the unsmoothed cage or the wireframe will be useless :hmm:

[QBA_PL]

... and it is unsmoothed
www.2smaga.com/qbic/Q5_face.jpg - 60 kb (http://www.2smaga.com/qbic/Q5_face.jpg)

[ThirdEye]

Not bad but it could be cleaner, kill a lot of tris, it will look better ;)

[QBA_PL]

...and new update :)
http://www.2smaga.com/qbic/Q8_face.jpg

I contained all hints and corrections.

[flingster]

loads better bud....
jacket material need changing...but i guess thats in hand.
:thumbsup:

[QBA_PL]

ok .. its last update ...
http://www.2smaga.com/qbic/Q8_face_A.jpg

http://www.2smaga.com/qbic/Q9_face_B.jpg

and here the version for owners of colourful monitors
http://www.2smaga.com/qbic/Q9_face_A.jpg

[flingster]

love the reflection of the eyes...adds to the realism..life like quality of snowgirl.
:thumbsup:

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