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Goon
02-13-2003, 11:36 PM
Here is something i am doing.
http://www.rit.edu/~eps8792/Sketch2.JPG

It is an idea for a short student film backdrop/prop i intend to create. As i feel the concept is not really all that great, i am hoping for input/inspiration/criticism from you forum goers.

I am open to anything, so please fire away. What can i add/change/do that you think will improve it?
It is going to be a large mural and as i don't have much time to toss it together, simple is better.

The central gap which everything revolves around will be filled by the actor in the final scene, hopefully bringing out his character dramatically.
Supposedly the finished product should have some sort of profound meaning, which obviously excludes anything happy, etc (that and i'm one of those manic depressant types so thats not really my thing). The more obfuscating and abstract the better. Mostly because people always seem to read deeper into those or at least assume that there is something profound about them.

Thankyou.

Goon
02-14-2003, 01:05 PM
Bump

RiotManZ
02-14-2003, 02:22 PM
ok just guessing... it is a skull nailed to a branch with some arrows eating an apple:eek: ?!?
this a really hard to get sketch. maybe you should post one with lower contrast.

for tips i´m not the right person. but hey, you got your first reply...:D

now folks help Goon getting started.:beer:

mactabilis
02-14-2003, 02:25 PM
Originally posted by Goon

I am open to anything, so please fire away. What can i add/change/do that you think will improve it?
It is going to be a large mural and as i don't have much time to toss it together, simple is better.
about them.

Thankyou. [/B]

Well it looks cool, but i can't see whats goin on... I would just do it how you like it, because it seems unique to you.

robingfx
02-14-2003, 04:51 PM
I agree with mactabilis! Your piece seems fairly unique so you should do it your way.

The drawing is a little confusing, but it looks interesting. I am looking forward to seeing your first models...

Goon
02-14-2003, 05:17 PM
sorry to dissapoint you robinfx, it will not be modelled. It is a 2d mock up of a much larger 2d piece i intend to create out of actual normal media.
update:
http://www.rit.edu/~eps8792/Sketch3.jpg
update with character positioned for final shot: http://www.rit.edu/~eps8792/Sketch.jpg

i'm thinking the right side is a little visually dominant.

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