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vijaymattam

12-06-2006, 10:14 AM

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Title: Previsualisation of a Commercial Bullding
Name: Vijayendra Mattam
Country: India
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Hi CG Guys ! My latest work for a client which has been already approved. I would like to take your valuable C & C for better future works. Kindly spare your valuable time for feedback.

SeifoSid

12-07-2006, 12:37 AM

nice architectural drawing, if it were up to me, the corner facing the street would have a less bulky mass, perhaps if the mass was moved to the left corner there would be more flow in the buildings exterior

Leonr

12-07-2006, 09:51 AM

Hi Vijay. I like the visualisation and am especially attracted to the post-production work you have done in Photoshop (trees, people, scene setting).

The only things which stand out are the shadows on some of the pedestrians in the scene (especially the people standing directly in front of the building) and the texture of the stone work on the brick wall around the site (which repeats, quite conspicously).

Aside from these (small) points, I think it's a class image!

vijaymattam

12-07-2006, 09:59 AM

Hi guys,

Thanks for taking time in responding, i'll surely take care of your suggestions in forthcoming projects.

Thanx & Regs
Vijay

neellss

12-08-2006, 12:37 PM

hi again...
i think you need more attention in lighting and texturing.Your lighting looks so flat,not good enough to show it to my client.Keep improve sir.I hope you can more good in the future.

regards

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