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Paul-M
12-05-2006, 07:36 PM
A little doodle done long time ago.. Now I'm trying to finish it with PhotoShop..
Problems with colors and light..

http://i12.tinypic.com/33yh07b.jpg


http://i13.tinypic.com/2wekyhj.jpg


I really hope You will help me.. ;)

Noctourne
12-05-2006, 07:48 PM
Great piece so far, I love the idea of the angel with the flute! :D Very cool. :)

One thing I'm noticing is that the wings look to be facing a different direction than the body. The wings are facing more toward the angel's right, (Our left), whereas the angel itself is facing directly toward the viewer. :)

Paul-M
12-06-2006, 04:26 PM
Oh... your right... :D i think that only her left wing is too exposed..
Thanks for advise.. ;)
I'll try to fix it

Paul-M
12-06-2006, 04:54 PM
So.. just redrew her left wing..;)
http://i11.tinypic.com/2cib8kz.jpg

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