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nicolo59
02-13-2003, 08:18 PM
Hey,
Here is the head of my perso.
Just start working on the body (hard work !!)

http://nicolaslesaffre.free.fr/3d%20tete01.htm

+/- 15 hrs for modelling and shading

What do you think of it ?
Thx

nicolo59
02-13-2003, 08:19 PM
oups....
my work is there : http://nicolaslesaffre.free.fr/3d%20tete01.htm

Rhid1en
02-13-2003, 08:43 PM
pretty nice model, but the textures still need some work. The eyebrows look really strange. If you're going to leave them just textured like that, you need to blend them smoother, even if they are to be really thick, bushy eyebrows. I'd also smooth the geometry so the eyebrow ridge isn't so hard and then hopefully they'll look more natural too. You need to work on some spec. and bump maps. Lastly:D , the eyes need some work. If they aren't actually modeled, do so, if they are you definitely need to bump up their glossiness levels!

Stimpy
02-13-2003, 10:59 PM
looking very good so far

things that bug me: the textures seem to have a bit of a washed out look to them. maybe they are just too low res, or maybe because there is no specular map yet and hence all kind of uniform.

the ear doesnt look right, the bottom part seems to stick out too much to the front. but maybe thats how your ear looks like.. :P

care to post some wires ?? always helps for commenting on a head.

sinthetic
02-13-2003, 11:29 PM
Very nice male head model, is that a self protrait? very good texture work!

evildeli
02-14-2003, 02:35 AM
i would have to agree the eye brows are just a little big. I like the side profile though. Cool nose.

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