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CogsOrchish
02-13-2003, 02:16 PM
Hey all, this is my first post ever for CGTALK, heh :applause:. I love this site, u guys give me the incentive to kick some arse...
Notice that Im not done texturing the model yet. Hopefully Ill be done soon. More images to come!!! Please add some input. Tell me what you think. What needs fixing, etc.
http://viz3d.net/upload/marine.jpg

CGmonkey
02-13-2003, 03:41 PM
Welcome to CGTalk.com ! :D

It looks coool! nice job!!

It's abit dark though ;)

well nothing to say! Hope to see more of you in the future! :beer:

_Kameron_
02-13-2003, 07:33 PM
i can barely see it. the textures have a dark tone which means you shouldn't have it on a black background.

Krystman
02-13-2003, 08:02 PM
I think the red X could use a bit more definition, but I like the details on the Paper sheet, especially the shading ;)
(for the slow: broken link :cry: )

d4rk
02-13-2003, 09:33 PM
:hmm: yeah I see a X too...

modeling-man
02-13-2003, 09:34 PM
I agree.
I think the form of the "x" is dead on but the lighting and texturing looks like something out of MS paint.
I think a couple more gradients and a bit bigger resolution would help us out with crits.
B ;)

CogsOrchish
02-14-2003, 04:49 AM
Sorry, somehow Geocities is tripping out. The link doesnt work properly or Geocities dont like sites linking to them. Typing the link might just help...] swat (http://www.geocities.com/jordans497/images/marine.jpg)

CogsOrchish
02-14-2003, 04:51 AM
BAH BAH BAH!!!

Loveless
02-14-2003, 06:19 AM
I see it, looks gr8, but I would add some detail to the texture considering you are using a 1024x1024. I guess you're still working on it though. Anyways, congrats :):beer:

Krystman
02-14-2003, 06:49 AM
I agree that the Background should be a different color. My expierience is that almost-white works well with most models, so this is one of the first things I change when I start modeling something.

You can't say much to the Modelling. Looks ok right now, I guess.

As for the Texture - I like the eye-area. Still, you should add some details around the nose. That shadow on the Nose is extremly sharp, maybe some anticipation in the Texture would help.

Also, I miss some fine Details on the Body like badges, or nubers or something.

modeling-man
02-14-2003, 07:24 AM
I still see nothing
talk to an admin they might be able to let you post it on their server if you ask REALLY nice.
B

boywonder
02-14-2003, 11:07 AM
well, you could change
http://www.geocities.com/jordans497/images/marine.jpg
to
http://www.geocities.com/jordans497/images/marine.txt
(notice: TXT format!!)

-> that way you can show the image using IMG tag :)
wierd bug in geocities, but it works! :)

CogsOrchish
02-14-2003, 03:55 PM
U kidding me right boywonder? Ok well, Ill try to post other images as soon as I finish toying with the textures in white bg instead of black.

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