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Grungefm
12-03-2006, 05:01 PM
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Title: Dwarf makin Friends
Name: Pablo Fernandez Gomez
Country: Espaņa
Software: 3ds max, mental ray

Well, this just a Test render of the Characters my girlfriend and I have been working on, to make short movies and clips.
A Dumb Orc and a Barbaric helmet-blinded Dwarf. Kinda cliche, I know :P, but is good for small gags.
No Texs, just shaders and Meshsmooth.
Crits are more than welcome..
Karlstok
12-03-2006, 09:06 PM
Fun stuff,Nice job.:thumbsup:
leishman
12-04-2006, 12:45 AM
aha,,,,,I like it...
dARCKLOWN
12-04-2006, 02:03 AM
I think you could have really sold it if you had gone overboard with their expressions.

Also the Dwarf looks like he has a tree stuck in his ass
KristopherLee
12-04-2006, 02:45 AM
You could definitely overexaggerate the dwarf a little more.. I can see what he's doing but you could sell the effect better with a little exaggeration in the limbs.. maybe bend him back more and let that hammer be waaaay back over his head behind him and ready to come down on him..

.. that would make me laugh for sure. I like the models and setting tho. Good work to the both of you.
FRENZIEDmind
12-04-2006, 03:43 AM
Simple and cool. Nice work!

crit: what dARCKLOWN says about the little viking and the tree. I'd move him or the tree.
AlexStratulat
12-04-2006, 05:45 AM
Nice work man!!! :thumbsup:
Grungefm
12-04-2006, 07:52 AM
You could definitely overexaggerate the dwarf a little more.. I can see what he's doing but you could sell the effect better with a little exaggeration in the limbs.. maybe bend him back more and let that hammer be waaaay back over his head behind him and ready to come down on him..

.. that would make me laugh for sure. I like the models and setting tho. Good work to the both of you.

Thanx All for the that critics! They re VERY useful to us to improve the work... :)
chokata
12-04-2006, 10:35 AM
hahaha I like it :thumbsup:
Cbroussard
12-04-2006, 05:42 PM
I would agree with the tree thing. Maybe move it to the right and you would still have a nice comp. The title made me laugh out loud. nice job!
YamaJii
12-20-2006, 01:40 AM
awsome render, and the charcters look cool. I love the pose on the dwarf. Im getting a Blur Studios fell to this whole piece. Very very nice work.

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