character: female (untitled)

[NanoGator]

Not bad!

Can we see a posed version of it? I just think it'd be cool to see. :)

[Dr-spline]

The breasts are too big for her frame and a little misshapen but the rest of her body looks nice. The butt is perfect looking. Can you post a wireframe so I can see how the breasts are constructed?

[Dr-spline]

I also noticed that her jaw is too strong(like a mans) how many polys is this model?

[fender]

NanoGator,
Yeah, once I get her rigged, but right now I'm in the middle of modeling footware for her.:)

Dr-spline,
polys are at 27127, here's a wire of the breasts

[Dr-spline]

Do you see what I was saying about the breasts? I have several refrence pics of diffrent shapes and sized of breasts but im not sure if cgtalk will let me post them.

[bansheeboyb]

you need to get some anatomy pics SOMETHING FEIRCE! and it appears she has some SERIOUS BREAST CANCER judging by the bumps in her breasts. And talk about some child bearing hips, appears as if she could have a whole litter at once.

needs a lot of work, as i said get some refference material. wouldnt take a whole lot of reworking to make this a really good model.

[fender]

http://www.teddomek.com/images/woman/skinny4t.jpg

[Dr-spline]

Im glad to see them smaller, but there still quite misshapen. Here are some pics to help you out.

http://www.xsiworld.com/br.jpg
http://www.xsiworld.com/br1.jpg
http://www.xsiworld.com/br2.jpg

[derelict]

sick

[RmachucaA]

hehehe... im counting the minutes it'll take for the images to be removed... hehehe...

[Dr-spline]

I was told that these images would be allowed on cgtalk since there not for any other purpose than refrence

[derelict]

i think it is still too much DR.

[evildeli]

umm, yeah reference. I really just read the articles for refrence. Anyway, good model.

[NanoGator]

Might I suggest using a link instead of embedding the images?

[fender]

:eek:
Yep, Dr-spline that might have been a little bit of over kill. You might have just cropped the section you were referring to. Anyway, I do apperciate all your help.:)

evildeli,
Thanks:)

little more progress, OR, maybe not:shrug:

http://www.teddomek.com/images/woman/freck/freck5.jpg

http://www.teddomek.com/images/woman/freck/freck4.jpg

http://www.teddomek.com/images/woman/freck/freck2.jpg

[ScottG]

I'm guessing you're going for realism here, if you are then ...

1) The hands need to be smaller
2) The 'top half' of the nose looks as if it needs to be pulled out more from the face, only the part below the bridge appears prominent right now,although its difficult to see from your picture.
3) The mouth is too wide\big.
4) waist needs widening just a little
5) hips are too wide
6) Jaw is too wide , making it appear masculine
7) Eyes are a little too far apart

It's obvious you've put a lot of work into this model and I bet if you spent an hour or two more on it, it would look really good :)

If you weren't aiming for realism ... then ignore the above , it looks cool :beer:

Just my 2 cents ...

[fender]

ScottG,
thanks for the feedback:thumbsup:
realism? um, yes and no:shrug:
side note: hats not finished...

http://www.teddomek.com/images/woman/hat/hat5bg.jpg

[Dr-spline]

Her lips are far to wide, but then again, I do like DSL :p

[fender]

http://www.teddomek.com/images/woman/flower/flowerw.jpg

[Akildee]

the character is good, but you have some proportion and anatomy problems, the lips are too large and the hands are too large. Also they are right about the breasts. Making them large is fine but you have model them as if they could really be attached to her frame. Think about the muscles in the shoulders. Right now it appears as if she has not structure in her shoulder muscles. Also the the entire lower mid section is too large and slight too low. And be sure to focus her eyes on a point so that she won't look so spacey. You are very close to having a cool model on your hands. Keep it up!

Akil

[fender]

little work on the lips, and shoulders. Thanks for the feedback Akildee :)

http://www.teddomek.com/images/woman/fix/fix0006.jpg

[Hellwolve]

Shouldn't the lips be less broad?

[S_3D_A]

I liked the size of the lips. You have a very unique style going here stay with it. Its very interesting and appealing.

I really love the freckels[(sp). I also like how you pay attention to detail. Keep it up. Lets see some more pics:thumbsup:

[fender]

cool. more pics! update on the size of the hands:)

look any better?

http://www.teddomek.com/images/woman/fix/fix0004.jpg

[fender]

http://www.teddomek.com/images/woman/pants/pants3.jpg

[Akildee]

Nice fixes! Once you have a really get in there and properly define the muscles in the shoulders she'll look pretty good. Get a live female model if you can.

akil

[fender]

Akildee,
Thanks. Got a little time to look at the shoulders. Still not sure yet:shrug:

http://www.teddomek.com/images/woman/shoulders/shd0001b.jpg

[fender]

http://www.teddomek.com/images/woman/kneel/kneel0002.jpg

yep, still going:buttrock:

[fender]

http://www.teddomek.com/images/woman/kneel/kneel0001.jpg

camera pulled back a little:p

[fender]

http://www.teddomek.com/images/woman/leaves/leavesb.jpg

[fender]

http://www.teddomek.com/images/woman/rock/rock0010.jpg

http://www.teddomek.com/images/woman/rock/rock0011.jpg

[fender]

http://www.teddomek.com/images/woman/rock/rock0013.jpg

http://www.teddomek.com/images/woman/rock/rock0014.jpg

[fender]

http://www.teddomek.com/images/woman/bgrocks/bgrocks0004.jpg

http://www.teddomek.com/images/woman/bgrocks/bgrocks0008.jpg

http://www.teddomek.com/images/woman/bgrocks/bgrocks0013.jpg

[fender]

http://www.teddomek.com/images/woman/bgpost/post1.jpg

http://www.teddomek.com/images/woman/bgpost/post3.jpg

http://www.teddomek.com/images/woman/bgpost/post5.jpg

just incase anyone is still following this:shrug:

[Hellwolve]

Looks good.

Only comment: I hope you're gonna improve those green plants? At the moment they don't look good. IMHO, you should search for some reference photo's

On a somewhat related note: I like the scene better without the green plants.


And, ladies and gentlemen, please give this fella some more C & C!

;)

[FallenSwordsman]

Heh heh - don't worry Fender, I'm following this with avid interest but you've already got my comments so I didn't want to start saying the same thing to you twice :)

Its an excellent piece - I'm quite surprised more people haven't picked up on it here.

[JamesMK]

This is clearly very ambitious, and you've obviously put a load of work into it. Yet I cannot help finding this character... um... creepy in a very... er.. creepy way. It seems to progress quickly though, and you've got quite a unique way of making environments. It has a sort of theatre scene feel to it... Oddly strange it is, all of it, and I think I'm trying to give positive feedback here :) ... The eyes are, well, somewhat scary, though it seems like that's not your intention, with that flowered hat and all...

[fender]

Hey,
Thanks for the feedback:) Tonight was just playing with some textures and lighting. Here's a couple shots...

http://www.teddomek.com/images/woman/tweak/tweak0013.jpg

http://www.teddomek.com/images/woman/tweak/tweak0012.jpg

[FallenSwordsman]

Hi Fender

Well if no-one is really going to say much about this, at least you can say that a fair few have actually seen it! I still think its an excellent piece of work and deserves a lot of credit - you've created a good environment here and the lady has a lot of character to her - I'm sure I'll eventually figure out why she's got a great big grin on her face. The colours work well too - the recent changes in colour scheme have added a lot more depth to the scene as a whole. Great job!

[fender]

http://www.teddomek.com/images/woman/sunflower/frame13.jpg

http://www.teddomek.com/images/woman/sunflower/frame6.jpg

[fender]

http://www.teddomek.com/images/woman/sunflower/frame3.jpg

http://www.teddomek.com/images/woman/sunflower/frame1.jpg

[fender]

http://www.teddomek.com/images/woman/blue/bframe1.jpg

http://www.teddomek.com/images/woman/blue/bframe2.jpg

[Grub]

Well, I think this is great.:buttrock: It has a kind of dream-like quality to it, from the blossom, to the rocky 'head' the woman's kneeling on. There's a lot to look at.:surprised Love the hat she's wearing. The only thing about her I'd change, would be to give her cuffs some frills.:thumbsup:

[fender]

Thanks Grub.

I'll work on those cuffs. Good idea:thumbsup:

[fender]

http://www.teddomek.com/images/woman/grass/grass.jpg

http://www.teddomek.com/images/woman/grass/grass1.jpg

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