Vehicle: Slk 230 - Critique

[]v[ajestic]

Here's a little test render of the sucker :surprised

http://www.friserverplads.dk/maje/05.jpg

[]v[ajestic]

Do I really have to resort to bumping to get some replys :shrug:

[Xyllon]

i am in no position to crit, becuase i am also learning to make a car, but good luck, and i hope someone that knows this stuff helps you soon. I have posted two wips, in 2 weeks, and no reply. thats just the way it is. :shrug:

[yfx]

did you follow the blueprints?? the front headlight and the fron tintake seemskinda weird.

[]v[ajestic]

Xyllon : thx for the reply m8 :) ill be sure to crit your work the next time i see some. good luck to you as well .

yfx : Yea I followed the blueprints I got from : www.suurland.com pretty much..
But you are right... the intake looks pretty wierd, so i have removed it :wip: and im making a different kind of front.. a tad more sporty.

Mercedes gone wild :

http://www.friserverplads.dk/maje/sporty.jpg

[]v[ajestic]

Btw. If theres any "material-gurus" out there plz respond :p I need to make a brazil glass shader... but i cant get it white... the opacity just controls how black the glass is going to be :hmm:

[ZeBoxx]

Heya,

I'd say check out the "SSS - Using Wax" and/or the "Brazil Glass Material" examples. Those should get you on your way.

Best regards,
Richard Annema

[]v[ajestic]

Ok ill try that :) thx Richard

[slice56]

the edges are way too rounded. they need to be sharp. crisp. thats what looks weird about the headlights. also, the grille that you had in there earlier had the same problems, and it was pinching too. If you fix that, it would really help out the model. The front end of a car is what gives it its strength, or lack thereof ;)

[]v[ajestic]

Well i have had some time to reflect on my model :p and i decided to make some drastic changes..

here's a little screendump:

http://www.friserverplads.dk/maje/concept.jpg
(kinda large 1280x960)

And thx for all the reply's guys you have been really helpfull.. keep em' comming.

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