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Dusk108
02-12-2003, 10:14 PM
This is a character I'm working for my short film. He's a sorta of cyberpunk chararacter. I'm going for a comic book style here. So any comments criticisms are welcome, feel free to tear it apart. But no flames please.:wip:

This is the near finished model after smoothing. No texturing yet just some color for clarity. Done in maya 4.5.

http://www.nmcstudents.com/~3djr/Rohan/guy1.jpg
http://www.nmcstudents.com/~3djr/Rohan/guy2.jpg
http://www.nmcstudents.com/~3djr/Rohan/guy3.jpg
http://www.nmcstudents.com/~3djr/Rohan/guy4.jpg
http://www.nmcstudents.com/~3djr/Rohan/guy5.jpg
FallenSwordsman
02-13-2003, 12:56 PM
Overall a good model - the only comment I can make is that the hands could do with a bit of work and the eyes look a bit big. But when he's cartoony you expect big eyes. Mouth corners aren't quite right either
clusterfuq
02-13-2003, 02:17 PM
what about a pic of the whole thing?

agree, the iris are way too big, just shrink them abit. looking good tho.
Dusk108
02-13-2003, 05:37 PM
Ok i Changed the head a bit, here it is.
http://www.nmcstudents.com/~3djr/Rohan/head2.jpg

also here is a full pose.
http://www.nmcstudents.com/~3djr/Rohan/fullpose.jpg
evildeli
02-14-2003, 03:13 AM
i like the veins in the arm. The thumb needs a bit of work. I guess my biggest concern is the stlye. You said comic book, but realistic comic book, like Alex Ross realistic? Or comic book like Ren and Stimpy? I can't tell what stlye you're going for with this model. If it's a comic book realism, i would suggest adding more detail. You already added veins. I would contine on that structure. Develop the knuckles more( every comic book has a POW! with a good fist). And then carry that to the face. Eyes look better. Maybe needs eyebrows. Hope this helps. Looking forward to the texturing.
Dusk108
02-14-2003, 03:26 AM
Evildeli- i keep forgetting that comic book covers a whole range os styles. I Meant more along the lines of superhero comics like marvel and dc, or even image stuff. Thanks for the suggestion.

cluserfuq and fallenswordsman- thanks for the suggestions also, hands have been improved a little. I'll post a picture when i think i have them correct.
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