CGTalk - Something Missing

baroness

11-28-2006, 10:04 PM

Hello! I'm new here, and this is my first attempt at painting something in Photoshop. I think I'm on the right track, but something's missing and I cant quite figure out what it is. Any help is greatly appreciated. Thanks!http://medrender.com/bride.jpg

frostblade

11-28-2006, 11:34 PM

field of depth (some things need to be more blury)
highlights to make her skin more radiant and less matte where it's not suppose to be.
fine hairs for hair line, eyebrow, etc.
shadows for the jewels so they don't lool like they are floating.
edge of face too sharp on right.
eyes too white and not smooth (iris edge too sharp, highlight too blury)... eyelashes cause shadow on eyeball too...maybe some creases for eye lids and eye bag since her eyes so big.

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