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breakerfall

11-27-2006, 12:16 PM

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Title: Suzuki RM-Z450 Dirtbike
Name: David Coalter
Country: USA
Software: 3ds max, After Effects, Brazil r/s, Photoshop

Suzuki RM-Z450 rendering for Racer X magazine's editor David "Ping" Pingree. Rendered using Brazil R/S. Dirtbike graphics done in Photoshop. Compositing done in After Effects. 3 area lights plus HDRI skylight, no GI.

Silverwing

11-27-2006, 06:58 PM

Hey... great modeling! Looks very
detailed. I like it your materials and
your lighting. Keep it up! Very clean
render!

SmoothWiz

11-27-2006, 08:23 PM

Hey dude! thought I´d drop in and hand out some stars!:-)

+ for modeling, texturing, lighting, shading´n rendering.

- for pose. I would have liked to see the bike in a bit more of an actionpose, or at least in some pose, or just with the handlebars turned...but perhaps they wanted u to render it ike that.?

oh...and a biiig + for motif!

5 stars buddy! keep it up!

buggsy

11-28-2006, 09:25 AM

Excellent model.

The upside down forks are very well done. The colour and look of them are just right.

The detail on the engine and front suspension are very well done. I like the subtle bend in the brake & clutch cables.

I have a KX250 race bike in my office so sorry if I'm able to be convieniently picky.

Your front tyres tread is not quite there yet. The nobbys on the tyre stagger like your rear tyre unless the tread pattern is one I haven't seen before. It seems as though from counting your nobby's that you have way too many on the front tyre.

Your seat looks too glossy. I'm sure they have a gripper seat (patterned surface) so you don't slide around on the seat to much.

I was thinking about doing a model of my bike but am to daunghted by it. You make it look easy and I'm sure it wasn't

Excellent job.

Buggsy

machadoj

11-28-2006, 11:39 AM

Nice and clean! Shader and modelling are very good.

Congrats! :)

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bluemagicuk

11-29-2006, 07:03 PM

Excellent modelling and textures .. im on a honda hornet myself so i know bike textures intimatly :P ... i really like the forks and wheels textures .. really realistic and the overall glow is a nice touch ... nice one !!

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