CGTalk - WIP Cartoon Head

FredSpeaks

02-12-2003, 03:40 AM

I am working on a cartoon head and would like some crits. First, I have to add the other ear, I want to add a few more hairs to the chin.

What do you think?

http://www.fred-speaks.com/crazy_phill.jpg

Phasmatis

02-12-2003, 06:24 AM

One thing is that the tongue comes from the throat not the bottom of the mouth but apart from that it looks good. :thumbsup:

Will you be animating it?

FredSpeaks

02-12-2003, 12:44 PM

Thanks. At some point I plan on animating him. He wont speak really, but I am planning on adding soft IK to the tounge and drool. :drool:

Phasmatis

02-12-2003, 01:55 PM

Sounds cool, make sure you post the animation when you're done. :)

addicted2_3D

02-19-2003, 07:36 PM

just my 2cents.. I think that the nose might look a little beakish since it kind of blends right into the cheeks and has no apparent nostrils. Other than that I definitely like where its going.

That Adrian Guy

02-19-2003, 08:11 PM

It's great. However the nose and the ears have got to go.. there's no rhyme or reason to them and they hurt the model in general.

Also, you should add more of a bone structure around the eye sockets.\

kThxBye!

FredSpeaks

02-20-2003, 12:27 AM

Thanks for the comments. I haven't had much time to work on, but see some time coming up tomorrow. I am reshaping his nose a little, and will add his hat and metal plate.

This is the sketch that I am working from. I hope to have the final scene very similar to this.http://www.fred-speaks.com/CPK.jpg

Thnaks again for the comments.

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