Weeeeeeeeeee

[moonman]

Its a nice image but I think you need to make it look slightly more realistic, add some texture to the frame work and some bolts, it all looks a bit flat you know?

Also I think it also looks a bit self illuminated, there is no shadows, this is because there isn't one main light source.

It is a good start and it will be weet when you have finished it, have a play with textures and lighting!

Enjoy

[Edgemaster]

Cool start so far.....Now all you need are some people....:)

[Raul-Reznek]

Pretty good start...


1) U have to improove the look of the rails
2) Lighting in the scene is boring, I suggest u chage that
3) The form of the ...coaster...isn't too aerodinamic :-)D

See ya!

[xynaria]

I really like the idea behind this pis but at the moment there's a lot working against itself. There's probably a better viewing angle than the one chosen but that not withstanding, having an image that looks to be centred but is actually offset doesn't neccessarily help.
The background elements seem like they have been dragged in against their will from some low poly outake. The picture is presumably 'inspired' by speed but the cars are all static. Think this could be a job for motion blur!
Sorry if I seem overly critical.. I just happen to think that there's a much better result hiding in there that you are probably more than capapble of bringing out. :)

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