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raultabajara

11-23-2006, 09:04 PM

http://www.raultabajara.com/you-turn-03.jpg

NEW POST
http://www.raultabajara.com/you-turn-08.jpg

http://www.raultabajara.com/you-turn-06.jpg

Hello Guys!

This is the first WIP of the "You Turn"
www.raultabajara.com\you-turn-02.jpg (http://www.raultabajara.comyou-turn-02.jpg/)

http://www.raultabajara.com/you-turn-02.jpg

I try to tell a history with this image. A boy that have no friends becouse his is a NERD... So he have a imaginary frient (tha dragon). whon the another boys tread hin bad He tread bad you imaginary friend...

so i use two composion tecnics.
1º The Imaginary dragon are in the golden Area of the image
2º the vanish point of the image is the forehead of the boy - to say "all of this come fron my imagination"
www.raultabajara.com\you-turn-01.jpg (http://www.raultabajara.com/you-turn-01.jpg)

http://www.raultabajara.com/you-turn-01.jpg

I love Vanish point and tecnical perspectve... So, the chess looks like wrong - but this perspective is right. A teacher say to me one time "if seens like wrong, trun to like right - is art not a tecnical thing)... maybe i listen him and chande the perspective of the chess,
what yours says about this image!
i love comments! please! :)

raultabajara

11-24-2006, 09:01 PM

Anyone? :(

Runecaster

11-24-2006, 09:07 PM

I didn't think the perspective was off actually.

I think the chair in the bottom right corner doesn't serve the composition very well though - and perhaps you can move that either out of frame entirely or open your canvas more and maybe have all the chair showing so it isn't all over the corner there.

I think the concept is adorable :)

raultabajara

11-28-2006, 06:17 PM

Second WIP

I love critcs and comments! :)
my message is clean in this new vision of the image?

http://www.raultabajara.com/you-turn-03.jpg

guide lines
http://www.raultabajara.com/you-turn-04.jpg

aldog

11-28-2006, 07:42 PM

I love the concept, and the boys maniacal look is just super

Runecaster

11-28-2006, 07:55 PM

Oooh yes!! This is really a great concept, original and cute -- love his expression too :) Looking forward to updates :)

raultabajara

11-29-2006, 08:43 PM

Up of the Boy :)

two times short than the original size
http://www.raultabajara.com/you-turn-05.jpg

raultabajara

12-07-2006, 07:49 PM

http://www.raultabajara.com/you-turn-06.jpgOk, in the image I say everytingh about this post!
I wanna comments! :)

raultabajara

12-08-2006, 05:20 PM

http://www.raultabajara.com/you-turn-07.jpg

Ok, I start to paint the dragon. Frist I paint the light. :)

Tchelo

12-08-2006, 06:14 PM

Hey, great job, Tabajara. The little boy really looks annoying. No wonder he has no friends.

I really like when theory ain't forgotten in artwork. Looking forward to the work done. The only thing that's bothering me is the dragon's chair position. I'd change it's perspective so it would fit the dragon's position, but it's just a detail.

Keep up the good work.

raultabajara

12-12-2006, 08:04 PM

Hello guys!
Another WIP UP

I change the face of the Boy and make "final" the face of the dragon
:)
http://www.raultabajara.com/you-turn-08.jpg

aumortis

12-12-2006, 09:52 PM

Hello!

Everything looks great so far, but I liked dragon's previous glasses more xD Keep up! :thumbsup:

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