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WHM
11-23-2006, 06:04 PM
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Title: Pool
Name: Wael Elseliseli
Country: Egypt
Software: 3ds max, finalRender

In this scene i tried a new way of render i didn't use before . . . i used finalrender sp3 for render . . . i hope u like it . . . comments r welcome.
WHM
11-23-2006, 06:47 PM
Another Shot
WHM
11-23-2006, 06:50 PM
http://aycu22.webshots.com/image/6301/2006351645305477262_rs.jpg
LarsSon
11-23-2006, 09:58 PM
Good start. More details and it will turn quite nice.

I really liked to know what is this new way to render.
What do you mean?

For me, the image looks quite dark. Not sunny at all.
Maybe it's my monitor or yours.
Materials look quite flat. There could be some speculars
or reflections somewhere.

-LarsSon
veljko-lemonade
11-24-2006, 08:39 AM
looks coll, but it is waaay to dark- you should brighten it up alot, and on the wall you can see the polygons, so i would subdivide it to make it smoother-
also, i would photoshope in some grass where the grass polygons hit the edge of the pool, to break up the straight line of the polygone, cos this way you can see that the grass is only a texture map and has no hight-
hope this helps
:)
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