library

[Naisart]

Hi,

I really like this picture but I think the noise filter is pretty annoying.
I could definantly see this image in a childrens book.

Maybe some darker shadows is needed to make it more dramatic.

[fajdros]

Hi!
nice atmosphere, i love books so it's heaven for me.

[T-Scholes]

I think this could probably benefit from using values to distinquish seperate shapes and different areas perhaps. Values are the most important thing when it comes to readability. Use them to show off which planes are more parallel to your light and closer to your light - use values to distinquish between bookshelf and railing. Use them to distinquish between foreground shapes and background shapes, near and far.

Ok, I'm rambling... anyways sweet perspective and style.

[Crimmy]

holy bejeebers. Thats alot of book there! A person could fall to their death, while walking and reading. hehe. Almost like a optical illusion!

On top level, between the wall and the railing. It almost tricks me to think they are together. I think its all the vertical lines, and then the horizontal linesssssssssssss..... 8 hours, man, I believe that.

[pixyfearie]

thank you all for the imput i will try to find something a little better than the noise filter i have on there now. your right it is a bit annoying. and the values are going to need a lot of work. i will try to fix this one soon and repost thank you all!

[pixyfearie]

http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y125/pixyfearie/library3.jpg

i darkened up the corners here and took some of the saturation out. the books are still seeming a little monotone to me though i think.

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