PS painting

[avmani]

hi pixy!
nice work man! especially i likes the treatment you have given to her hair.
but what i feel is if there is this much light as she have much dark shadow on her back...you have to paint a lot of lighting and depth in her face too...
and her face needs much more tone values (in colours) to make it much live...

make her jacekt too with little bit depth on where it lays in her body...

anyway its really a nice piece to start with man....

cheers!:thumbsup:

[pixyfearie]

yea i never really got in depth with the shirt. and i agree about the darker shadows on her back and such thank you for pointing these things out to me.:D

[pixyfearie]

http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y125/pixyfearie/retry.jpg

i fixed some of the colors on this one and cropped alot of the shirt out. i tried going back in and giving her a little more lively color but im not sure how dramatic the change is.

[Dahlia]

her right eye is the only thing throwing this off. if you fix that its perfect

[pixyfearie]

thank you dhalia. i have tried many different things in attempt at fixing that eye but as i accidently flattened the image and saved i think the only thing left is to go back and start again. there are a couple of things i will try first but that eye has proved to be a problem since the beginning

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