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artraider
11-22-2006, 11:55 PM
Render (http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c72/artraider/entrance.jpg)
This is a temple entrance I am working on to put in my portfolio, any crits or comments are welcomed.

Gamedev
11-23-2006, 12:35 AM
Ok, I'm stonewalling you on this one - link the photo inline so we dont have to click on links to see it. Then I'll post some feedback :)

TychoCelchuuu
11-23-2006, 12:51 AM
The banners look kind of busy/out of place, and I don't really get what the eye-thing is on the door, but other than that it looks pretty awesome. The pillars are really nice.

artraider
11-23-2006, 12:52 AM
ok, now I finaly got the image to work

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c72/artraider/entrance.jpg

artraider
11-23-2006, 12:58 AM
this is how it looks with your sugestion, alot of people have been confused by the eye idea.

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c72/artraider/entrance-1.jpg

GradiusCancer
11-23-2006, 02:30 AM
Thats kinda neat at first glance, but seems like every section is a different style. There are also different in detail scale and medium. What do you mean for this to be exactly (beyond temple)? Are you using any sort of reference? How do those front doors work?

artraider
11-23-2006, 03:33 AM
I tryed to use anui designs, but looked at some refrances from games and diffrent cultures. I should add door handles of sorts. I guess I just had in mind a temple environment, should I start over or something? Would what I had so far be bad to show on a portfolio on my website? I tryed to be creative mabey I didnt succede.

psychojohno
11-23-2006, 07:37 AM
No dont start over! I like this a lot! It looks better without the eye. I think the reason it looks a little odd is because of the doors.The doors should be stone and maybe make the steps a little less green!

artraider
11-23-2006, 09:09 AM
Thank you and I will take your advice and post a update latter, I need to sleep as its 4am.

artraider
11-23-2006, 06:07 PM
here is the update I said I would have and I think it looks more together with the stone door and lack of green.

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c72/artraider/entrance-2.jpg

psychojohno
11-23-2006, 07:28 PM
To me that looks far better! I think you can make it even better now by adding some weeds maybe some vines on the building then just add some sort of background behind it and some sky. Its nice reminds me of Indiana Jones. I think it would look cool built into some sort of cliff side but its up to you :thumbsup:

artraider
11-23-2006, 08:32 PM
I will give that a shot and post back latter.

artraider
11-24-2006, 08:50 AM
This is a update with the previous idea in mind and I think it did help out

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c72/artraider/entrance-4.jpg

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