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ittrium
11-18-2006, 05:10 AM
Bilogortsev Dmytro is entered in the "Eon Challenge" update: View Challenge Page (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/eon/view_entries.php?challenger=12425)

Latest Update: Finished Trailer: Done.. Maybe I am Happy
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ittrium
12-09-2006, 11:16 AM
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EON trailer
Style and logo

ThE-ShiFT
12-10-2006, 12:43 PM
Nice start! wondering how the "plasma" effect has been created...particles?
Good luck and welcome to the challenge! :)

ThE-ShiFT team

ittrium
12-10-2006, 04:24 PM
Nice start! wondering how the "plasma" effect has been created...particles?
Good luck and welcome to the challenge! :)

ThE-ShiFT team

On this stage, this is only Photoshop :)
Plug-in KPT FlaxFlame, motion blur, brightnes/contrast adjustment and layer blending mode adjustment.
In movie, It maybe particles but in After FX. Or Maya's particles but adding color and glow in afterFX...

fifty3dragons
12-10-2006, 09:05 PM
Yeah, very exciting first image. Welcome to the challenge and good luck!

ittrium
01-04-2007, 11:21 PM
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As though all. Only seems that the phrase of "the stone yielded a secret that made even Earth’s survival pale into insignificance…" is too long for a title. Are there ideas how to shorten it, but that sense remained?

ittrium
01-04-2007, 11:25 PM
Yeah, very exciting first image. Welcome to the challenge and good luck!
Thank you fifty3dragons, I think that continuation will follow necessarily!

Cofiction
01-05-2007, 12:46 AM
As though all. Only seems that the phrase of "the stone yielded a secret that made even Earth’s survival pale into insignificance…" is too long for a title. Are there ideas how to shorten it, but that sense remained?

Here is few modification frases:
"... The secret of the Stone overwhelms Earth's futile survival strugle ..."
"... The Stone's secret marches over Earth's strugle for survival ..."
Hope these help you out :)

Since you have only so much time left, I think you should really push for the clarity of the storyboard -> one glimpse sees the story.
You found the story nicely, keep pushing to the finnishline! :thumbsup:

ittrium
01-05-2007, 06:56 AM
Thank you for advice, Cofiction!

When little time remains, a brain works more productively, isn't it? :)
I love approaching of deadline :thumbsup:

ittrium
01-05-2007, 05:57 PM
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This is firs part of my soundtrack.
Any comments?

Play Video >> (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/eon/player.php?entry_id=75986)

fifty3dragons
01-05-2007, 10:51 PM
Nice intro. For me the rhythm felt just slightly off right at the beginning, either the space between the repeating heartbeat/knocking sound (i.e. maybe the space needs to be removed?) or the point where the electric guitar enters (i.e. it feels like it maybe comes in too early; maybe push it back another beat or two?). Otherwise I thought it sounded rpetty good. Nice build to it.

ittrium
01-06-2007, 10:50 AM
Nice intro. For me the rhythm felt just slightly off right at the beginning, either the space between the repeating heartbeat/knocking sound (i.e. maybe the space needs to be removed?)

There where emptiness, voice of Patricia will sound...
Thank you very much for comments!
An Updated version will be at the evening.

ittrium
01-06-2007, 11:35 PM
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I hope no changes anymore.
Part 01

ittrium
01-06-2007, 11:37 PM
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And part 02

ittrium
01-06-2007, 11:40 PM
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Part 03

fifty3dragons
01-07-2007, 04:01 PM
Hey, nice job on the edited boards. I like how it's been expanded with some action shots, especially around the beginning. It'll be interesting to see it put into an animatic along with your soundtrack.

ittrium
01-07-2007, 09:11 PM
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Some correction, some voice. But...
I have some problems with final? more dynamic part...
I think it's time to rest :)

Play Video >> (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/eon/player.php?entry_id=76062)

ittrium
01-07-2007, 09:18 PM
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Models for some war scenes... Texturing will be later.

ittrium
01-07-2007, 09:23 PM
Hey, nice job on the edited boards. I like how it's been expanded with some action shots, especially around the beginning. It'll be interesting to see it put into an animatic along with your soundtrack.
Thanx!
I try to work quicker!
Deadline visits me in my nightmares :)

fifty3dragons
01-08-2007, 03:58 PM
That's a great animatic. I think it'sl coming together quite nicely. At first I thought it stopped rather abruptly, but then I saw that it only covers the first half of your storyboards. It's a great start though. Hope you find the time this week to finish it up. Keep at it! :)

ittrium
01-08-2007, 05:01 PM
Hope you find the time this week to finish it up. Keep at it! :)
I have no choise! I want to realize my great ideas :)
Thanks a lot!

userBrian
01-10-2007, 11:36 PM
Ittrium, That's a cool soundtrack. The woman's voice is great. I like how the voice blends with the guitar. Gotta add my voice to my guitar too. Hope we finish. The explosion sounds good too. What guitar/amp/software do you use?

ittrium
01-11-2007, 10:41 AM
Ittrium, That's a cool soundtrack. The woman's voice is great. I like how the voice blends with the guitar. Gotta add my voice to my guitar too. Hope we finish. The explosion sounds good too. What guitar/amp/software do you use?
Yamaha Pacifica :)
Zoom 707
Software in general Sony Soundforge 7.0

I think I need to record that vioce again. Because emotions of it not so true.
Last part of the soundtrack almost ready. Software used for it - FruttyLoops.

OZ
01-12-2007, 03:01 PM
well done! veery interesting stuff. I like the cut of the story pointed to the change of future!:applause:

ittrium
01-27-2007, 12:11 PM
well done! veery interesting stuff. I like the cut of the story pointed to the change of future!:applause:
I returned. There was a lot of work, but I must finish the trailer!
I hope farther will please yet more ;)
In the evening I will submit part of video.

ittrium
01-28-2007, 08:05 AM
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Some Patricia's ideas about future after reading book "History of Death".
Hope you'll like it!

Play Video >> (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/eon/player.php?entry_id=76892)

fifty3dragons
01-28-2007, 01:23 PM
Some nice effects in there. That building didn't have a chance. Looking good for the final cut. Keep going!

ittrium
01-28-2007, 02:31 PM
Some nice effects in there. That building didn't have a chance. Looking good for the final cut. Keep going!
Thanx! I have a lot of work and try to finish this trailer at a time.

ittrium
01-28-2007, 06:54 PM
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My character modeling skills is not good enough. So all models and scenes I rendered in Maya but close-ups in Poser...

ittrium
01-28-2007, 07:13 PM
By the way, who and what music does listen in the process of trailer creation?
What music is most inspire?
I like rock, but last times listen Juno Reactor....

ittrium
01-28-2007, 09:54 PM
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This is 1/3 part of my vision of the EON trailer...
Any comments?

Play Video >> (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/eon/player.php?entry_id=76923)

spire
01-28-2007, 10:12 PM
I like it, especially the library scene. Waiting for the final.

fifty3dragons
01-29-2007, 01:01 PM
Looking good. I really like the lighting/coloring the library scene. No crits from me. I'd say just keep going and get it all put together. Great job so far!

ittrium
01-31-2007, 10:11 PM
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I don't like some things....

Play Video >> (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/eon/player.php?entry_id=77205)

ittrium
01-31-2007, 10:54 PM
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Congratulations!

Play Video >> (http://features.cgsociety.org/challenge/eon/player.php?entry_id=77217)

ittrium
01-31-2007, 11:07 PM
Thanx for all for advices, comments and ideas about trailer!
Good luck for you all. See in the next challenge :)

userBrian
02-01-2007, 12:29 AM
Congratulations on a cool, dynamic trailer! Interesting style with an edge for stylized effects.

ittrium
02-01-2007, 12:52 AM
Yeah!
Thanx, but I am a bit wicked on my PC. Due to some bugs, there was a chance to be late with this trailer. And final part rendered not in full resolution....

fifty3dragons
02-01-2007, 04:06 AM
Congratulations on finishing! Nice, fast paced trailer. Good music. Still think the library shot is my favourite, althought I like the door rising up ont he Frants as well. Too bad about your computer problems, but I think it came out just fine in the end. Good job.

ittrium
02-01-2007, 03:15 PM
Thanx, I had much time for library scenes. But I did not like the final. I think that next time will be much better. I think that animation challenges - good idea, and hope that will be another trailer challenges. I have fantastic feeling during this work.

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