Environment: Subway

[Ti22]

Looks good but the floor just looks off. The texture looks wierd. I think you should change the floor texture:p

[stephen2002]

yes, the floor texture does look a bit TOO dirty. It is also quite dull, just the same objects repeating (including the floor texture). The lighting is good.

[Daniel]

...GO and ADD more detail!

Paper. Old Bottles. some other trash...damage some walls, add grafities.

It looks boring...

cya.

[Klaymen]

agree.. more trash spread around the scene.. DOWN DIG THE CAMERA ANGLE looks like some drunk guy shot this picture... i like it

[PhilWesson]

the lighting is great. i agree about adding some trash and cans and stuff... maybe a little DOF for atmosphere...
good job though!

[NewGen]

Graffitti and trash on the ground would make the scene a lot more believable. The glow on the lights themselves seems really bright for how much light exists in the scene.

Also, behind the columns on the wall, there is glow coming from lights that don't seem to be lighting up anything...it's just a glowing light.

And this is just personal preference, but you might want to throw in a trashcan somewhere to break up the repetition of the scene, unless you want the repetition to be there. Thats all.

But good job on making the floor like it is, so often you see something like an alleyway (or subway) that is unnaturally clean. Well done.

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