Character: Samouraï clashhhhh!!!!

[Corpu$]

a walk animation is calculating... and some actions move!! when I have some time to spend of course :p

[SwatZeR]

Nice pose and character, but loose the red background. The figure is great, but the red is distracting me...

[Corpu$]

yep, it's only to hurt eyes :scream: full red color means blood!

[swords]

that's no way to hold a sword ...
and i got a feeling he'll fall backwards out of balance

i like the materials and texture of his clothing though ..

[Corpu$]

Select your character...


round 1 fight! ^_^ :twisted:

[Corpu$]

walking... I don't know what he is looking...


http://mapage.noos.fr/corpus//gallery/Samourai/ronin_walking.jpg

:rolleyes:

[WhiteRabbitObj]

Very cool, looks like something I'm workin on. Is his clothing a cloth sim? That would be awesome! I look forward to seein this asap! =)

[WhiteRabbitObj]

BTW. the handle of his katana appears to be too wide and not thick enough, if you catch my meaning.

[Corpu$]

ok ok I'll change this butcher katana :) and if u see, i didn't make any shader on it... please wait tomorrow or few days you'll see a great katana :) and some animations...

[Corpu$]

BTW, I'm looking for job for the moment, I'm freelance in Paris... Anyone ??:wavey:

[Chappo]

Cool design :)

Can't wait for some heavy mortal kombat action scene animations :D

[Corpu$]

new pic (WIP)!! background is on its way...


http://mapage.noos.fr/corpus/gallery/Samourai/samou_house.jpg

[Hellwolve]

It starts to look better and better!

:applause:

[NewGen]

I love the clothing and the hat. The worn down look of them is great.

Here is the critique: His legs and feet look silky smooth, like they just had a fresh shave and wash. According to his clothing, and the fact that he is a wandering ronin, they should be pretty filthy. Also you might want to touch up his wrist/hand wrappings, they also look really clean in comparison. Maybe some blood stains like you have over his left leg on the first render. Thats all.

I also can't wait for an animation.

[Matt]

Originally posted by Corpu$
ok ok I'll change this butcher katana :) and if u see, i didn't make any shader on it... please wait tomorrow or few days you'll see a great katana :) and some animations...

Remember to make it not too shiny. Only the richest men had blades of fine metals.

[eRaDiCaT0r]

I agree...more gore is needed for this ronin to make him look more weathered.
Needs some bloodied up corpses of other samurai around him, oooh yeah!
:buttrock:

[Corpu$]

yes, the maps aren't finished in fact, tnat's true. I'll take a few moments to finish that later. I am on the animations now... Be patient, I must find a job too... :scream:

If anyone needs animations or pix or coffee :)...
...save me... corpus@noos.fr

[CJ]

I really dig it. Show more more more :)

[zdd]

Oh,he is japanese!!

[BiTMAP]

wow... I love that model... agreed on the legs and skin, perhaps some facial hair as well? hmm and keep the low detailed scenes they really just give it a nice feel of focal importance. I also suggest you look for a comic novel called "FORGE" if you can find it, and follow the storyline of that a bit, and you could look at the Ninji web animation as well. Those storylines have the feel I think would rawk for an original storyline for an long animation series you could make.

[eRaDiCaT0r]

Check out this character Manji from the Blade of the Immortal series...he is one bad ass ronin that I wish I had the time to model and do a short-clip duel someday....(keyword = someday) lol

:buttrock:

[walee]

yeahhhh corpus is in the place ... :buttrock:

everybody says hey ho !!! :scream:

finally some new pics of that samurai: I was wondering when will you ever post some new stuff .... Nice character corpus. What did you use for the cloth deformation ? Maya internal cloth simulator ?

Can't wait to see the animations ?

by the way, I do have a fundamental question : who is stronger ? Killy or Manji ?

[gL_spear]

Great character, only little thing is the feet look a little untextured towards the rest of him. other than that 'Brilliant'

[Radacci]

Auron from Final Fantasy X is a ronin, and i read that having a bottle of sake at your hip is very ronin, and having one arm in the shirt sleave is also very ronin. You can check him up, and parhaps add one or both of those aspects?

Anyway i find this image cool, but parhaps the bandages at his wrists are to white? add some dirt map to make it seem...*used*
The canvas cloth looks awsome! :drool:

[Corpu$]

Thanx to all of you but I haven't time yet to work on this stuff :)

[Sanguis Mortuum]

I cant really crit the modelling, especially since Im a total beginner myself, but one thing is that the handle on the sword seems waaaaay too long.

[Corpu$]

I'll change all you want next week, but now i'm busy

[erwin1978]

No no. His sword should be super-shiny and studded with diamonds. Ronin's are scavengers. You know he's killed some rich boy for that sword. :) Also, cut off his right arm. He should be a lefty, but a master lefty. Ronins also cut off the fingers of their adversaries; he should have a necklace of decaying fingers.:surprised

[CGmonkey]

OMG that rocks! :buttrock:
You own! :)

[Dogzer]

I love it! :applause: please post more pics with diferent attack poses!

[LeConcorde]

Good style!! awesome work!!! :buttrock:

[illOgic]

Samurai jack. :) love it. looks great.

[wedge]

Originally posted by Corpu$
Here come a Ronin, homeless, only goal is killing.... ^_^[/IMG]

that's not what ronin do! :eek:

[BiTMAP]

Remeber Ronin's are discraced Samourai, So his sword would have been a very nice sword, just aged and slightly under maintained... Also the backrounds remaining simple and un textured would keep the focus on the characters and increase the amount of work you can do, although enough detail is still needed to keep it real. So grass and water should look nice but not detract your eye... I'm also thinkin it would be kool to see a story not just about fighting, but about survival and coming to terms with how things are.

[Joodoos]

It's Samurai, not samourai ...

Nice work tho
:thumbsup:

[conjaman]

Very cool. I have a character like that. But, your style is very cool. Would love to see more.:applause:

www.ronincircle.com

[coCoKNIght]

Wow, really cool character! WANNA SEE MORE ANGELS/POSES! :D

[Radacci]

Isnt a ronin a masterless samurai?
his work was to protect his master, but the master died, so now he is a Ronin...

[RISKBREAKER]

Isnt a ronin a masterless samurai?
his work was to protect his master, but the master died, so now he is a Ronin...

I dont think it only has to be by death of the Master. A samurai can become a ronin by failure to protect his master, it doesnt mean death. So a disgraced samurai could be a ronin, even though the master still lives (e.g. a foiled attempt at a Master's life but the samurai was off somewhere with a bottle of sake....). Although I could be wrong......

But anyways....

This is freakin awesome!!!!! I had a Ronin|Shinobi concept of my own (full with a story and all), but this blows me the hell out!!!

Me wants to see more!!!

[erwin1978]

If you have any real questions just let me know. I'm really a Ronin.:wip:

[conjaman]

really?! I'm a ronin too:D

www.ronincircle.com

[podoba]

Aggresive samurai..i like it

[Rhid1en]

looks really good so far... other than the texture maps that have already been addressed; maybe it's just the pose, but it looks as though the strap on his left sandle isn't between the toes like on the right one, but going into his foot. If I'm wrong, no worries, but something to check:rolleyes:

[Corpu$]

This character is a killer, a bad silly guy... who kill every time he can, he is crazy, he can't control himself. I am writing his story... Let's see how a serial killer (as hero) live, in the old japan time!

[BiTMAP]

sorry, so your saying another good character in a stupid story? I mean really, that doesn't sound very interesting to me... no emotion, just death.

[thjazi]

très bon le perso !!! :buttrock:
comme tout ce ki est sur ton site d'ailleurs :cool:

[Trommeldaris]

Wow, looks really cool. I love the dirt and stuff :D

Reminds me of Rurouni kenshin :D

:applause: :thumbsup:

[WhiteRabbitObj]

Originally posted by BiTMAP
sorry, so your saying another good character in a stupid story? I mean really, that doesn't sound very interesting to me... no emotion, just death.

Dude, don't be an ass to him when you haven't even read the story. You don't know what it will be.

[Corpu$]

ABOUT STUPID STORY AND WILD STORY AND BRILLANT STORY : WHY PEOPLE LIKE "BITMAP" ARE SURE THAT A GOOD SCRIPT IS FROM THE SUBJECT ? WE CAN WRITE A GOOD STORY ABOUT ANYTHING, FROM YOUR MOM TOO :-) THE DIFFERENCES COME FROM THE STYLE, AND THE WAY YOU MAKE IT. SO PLEASE, I PREFER IF YOU SAYS A STUPID/SILLY/MAD/SICK/ CHARACTER IN A GOOD STORY. "BITMAP" DON'T TAKE IT PERSONAL, BUT, THINK BEFORE OPEN THE MOUTH.

:buttrock: :buttrock: :buttrock: :buttrock: :buttrock: :buttrock:

[betelgeuse]

Your character is very well done, but you are going to make my head explode with that red font you're using.

[erilaz]

I love it. Very Musashi.:D
Beautiful clothing and posture.
The feet probably could be tweaked a little, but I like!

Seriously though, the red! Lose the red. Like people have been saying, it's a headache making experience.:)

[M4Dn355]

http://l337images.com/images/emoticon24.gif Thats just awesome! good job man

[Corpu$]

Thanx for all comments and critiks about this character.

well, I'm sorry I can't update this thread for the moment, I need money for the moment, I have a new job, so u have to be patients. :( sorrrrrrrrryyy!!

I'll post a new thread for the second chapter of "Akusei". :)

see you soon!!

[Snakeman]

wakadimas-ka

[ale27]

Really cool! I like it!:thumbsup:

[bentllama]

Originally posted by Corpu$
This character is a killer, a bad silly guy... who kill every time he can, he is crazy, he can't control himself. I am writing his story... Let's see how a serial killer (as hero) live, in the old japan time!

you want a crazy katana weilding guy?

you should watch SWORD OF DOOM

the ending is amazing!

[Capt.Jackass]

excellent modelling and textures:thumbsup:... the only problem i have with it is that is the hilt of the sword supposed to be that long?

[bentllama]

Originally posted by Capt.Jackass
excellent modelling and textures:thumbsup:... the only problem i have with it is that is the hilt of the sword supposed to be that long?

i saw that too.

looks like a no-dachi.

i have held a few antiques in my hand. my gorilla mitts dwarf the age-old katanas...:)

[Corpu$]

next week you'll see how this samurai moves...;)

[saltank]

Those shoes must be pretty painful to more around in :cool:
Cool stuff.

[baka-raven]

amazing work Corpus! :applause:
Nice texturing and modeling :)

Can we see a wireframe ?

oh and how did you make the bandage around his arms and waist :)

[Dancing Monkey]

Does he have a name? If he doesn't, name him... Jack. I love that show. Alot of people around here don't watch cartoons anymore though... Samurai Jack Rocks!... BTW The model is great. Personally, I think the long hilt is a great touch.

[Corpu$]

here is a wire frame shaded...

[OZ]

S P L E N D I D!
The model,but more the materials,and the semi bw colours of the character on the red saturated background! I REALLY LOVE THIS WORK!
im currentrly modeling a samurai too,but ur is so superb.....i have to start again! ;)
Hope to see more...(i confess that may be fantastic a samurai movie with this kind of style......OH SWEET:love: )

[Fishyskawa]

I cant see it :( I love kenshin but the pics dont workthe period

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