Animation Test - Critique

[MrSolo]

Hey, thks for those repplies... he he he

Well, anyways, here is an update...

Fright Shot 2 (http://www.mrsolo.com/ani_sl_01.avi)

thks

[Jeffo]

ummm why hasnt anyone responded?!

i thought this was great!! excellent acting skills, and they had lots of character!! beautiful work, good anticipation, reaction and timing!

:thumbsup:

[ntmonkey]

I think its because people don't really appreciate how hard it is to do a good animation. I liked what I saw. The fact that you had the character "cartoon-ishly" hidden behind the pole was really cool. Maybe if you had the scared character kick the other guy in the balls would have been more "deserving." Yeah, beeotch! Who's laughing now?

Good job,

Lu

[KnightVFX]

Sweet...nice to see Slippy getting out there. But what about Frankenspline!!?? Nice animation. It seems like your yell of the second charactor is overpowering the scene, and that the take is kind of lost in the action. Maybe try exagerating the take a bit to match? Looks good though.

13 days till 3D37 Rocks the Industry!!!

[Maximus Groff]

WOW... thats great!

hope proton sees your peice..

Best of my.

[Grayscale]

Great anticipation. Good poses.

The punch at the end is off. If he were to do an "uppercut", then it would look better. But with the speed it is going now, it just doesn't look "right". I love the over exaggeration on the yell though. It seems like your second guy is emptying his lungs with that scream! Good job. Just work on that punch.

[MrSolo]

Thks for all comments...:thumbsup:

Hey Knight, good luck there on VFS... those guys ROCKS:buttrock:

Grayscale, How can I fix the punch? Some advices here would be really wellcome...:D

Thks one more time...

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