Character: Nastyfjas

[cdinic]

looks pretty damn nasty.. !

I dono if u wanted this look, but the torso it waaaay to small..

your ribs are lookin good but somthing is off.. maybe to many? not sure. the mesh seems a little dens there also..

knee caps looks a little to round.. not sure.. knees are really hard.

muscle in the thigs seems a little off..

super thin shins are sweet.. ankles are nice too..

not to sure about the super big big toe.

good work... I wana see more!

:bounce:

-Chris

[IronGoblin]

Thnx for the advice cdinic .

I tried to fix the areas you pointed out. Other than that i haven't done much. Lemme know what you think. Don't quite know what i could do about the ribs though. Sort of wanted them to be a bit "messy"...


Edit: Small update. Made som arms and hands and attatched to the body. Lemme know what you think...

http://www.polygonation.no/images/BODY04.JPG

[IronGoblin]

*BUMP*

Guess ill have to bump this if i want anyone to see it. Come on.. let me have it.. What can i improve? There seem to be an edge in the area between the chest and the upper arm.. dunno how to fix it though...

[coCoKNIght]

Somehow I can't see the images... :shrug:

[IronGoblin]

Dang..

Seems like my ISP has taken a nap.. God darnit in heck... I'll bump it again when i've yelled at the provider.. :-|

Have a nice day..

[Spirit2029]

very nice piece there, love the detail in the anatomy, looking forward to seeing what kind of head you through on him

Spirit2029

[coCoKNIght]

Aaah, now I see the pics and WOW, looking damn good! Looking forwart to seeing the head. :) :thumbsup:

[so_hi]

That is some nice work.

You really are paying attention to anatomy.

I like it when people warp reality a bit.

I don't really want to crit it at all but, the one thing I must point out is the connection of the thumb to the hand, looks like the angle and or size is a little off.

What package are you using? I usually can tell from something in the pic but , this one has me stumped.

Anyways, nice work.

I can't wait to see it rigged. :applause:

E.

[IronGoblin]

Thnx for the kind words, y'all..

Spirit2029/coCoKnight: I'll start working on the head tonight. Its only 8:33 am, and i've just started on my dayjob. That means no work on this in another 8-9 hours. (argh). The body was originally meant for another head (see link below) but as i progressed i started to see that the head wouldnt fit.

so_hi: You are right about the thumb. Ill scale it down a bit and rotate it a bit more. About the software.. its all lightwave. I guess my setup sing a hdri-map and some area-lights makes a bit weird to recognise.. And btw.. your not the only one who cant wait to see it rigged. Im loogking forward to that myself. It will be my first rig though, so dont expect miracles.. :D


Original head... (http://www.polygonation.no/images/horned3_4.jpg)

Have a nice day/night..

[IronGoblin]

Howdy.

Put a head on mr. nastyfjas. Cant decide if it fits though. Let me know. I've gotten sort of blind staring at this one, so please please help me out here.

Full body shot:
http://www.polygonation.no/images/BODY06.JPG

Link to closeup of upper body and head (http://www.polygonation.no/images/BODY07.JPG)

Have a nice day..

[Hexodam]

looks great :) the fingers and feet are the best :P

the crits
the torso is still a little too small, and I think it should be higher, the legs are just so massive

[IronGoblin]

Thnx Hexodam. I'll see what i can do about the torso. It is a bit difficult to do something about since the head and arms are attatched to it.. But ill try to fix it..


Have a nice day.

[IronGoblin]

<Bump>

Anyone else got any comments? It can't be that perfect. :-)

</Bump>

[eFDay]

Great model!
But something bother about arms and hands.
Hands shouldn 't be align this way to forearms forming a perfect straight line from shoulder to fingers.
Line should broken at wrist .
You should give a little angle to the hands to break that line.
And thumbs looks a little flat at their attachment point to the hands.
Hope it s clear enough and helpfull.

[verti]

awesome!!!

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